Magnolia

Written in Room # 3014 of Hotel Annapurna of Nepal.Dedicated to my friend Dr.Vinod Pandit.

Thank you magnolia for greeting again

Your flowers smile like white fairies

Your leaves emit tunes like rain

And flower buds sing like geese

I can feel your love,o magnolia

You bring joy in my heart

You remind me of my nostalgia

And invite me to admire art

But,I don't know your passion

Your history ,love pain or pleasure

I am amazed by your fashion

That always brings me precious treasure

I love your greetings in the morning

Magnolia,thank you for every thing

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

And I Thank You Zainul,
For bringing out the essence of the sweet aroma of your Soul.
You are always such a pleasure to read.
Whatever the subject you pour your Spirit over it abundantly.
You have a way of Blessing everything with pure dedicated Love.
You always bring me showers of joyful tears whether you are standing up for injustice and smiting the wicked deeds of the world or whether your heart is overflowing with abundant appreciation for Life's Beauty and treasures.
Your Heart is a storehouse of Love, Surely it is a Temple and I know God Lives there.
I always want to read everything you write. I know I will find Gods Love thru your words.

For me it's not what you write that I appreciate so much. I could easily sit like a child at your feet and be locked into every word you say.
I could sit beside you as a Peer and Discuss with you.
I could lie beside you under the clouds of the day and just listen or walk under the moonlight hand in hand and contemplate The world around us.

What an amazing Beautiful Soul you are Zainul.
I only wish you wrote more.
Your Friend and Sister,
Just me :-)

[zainul]

Dear Connie,
I could only weep as I read your long and elaborate review.
I don't have any word to reciprocate the Love and Honor you have given to me.
God bless you,dear Friend and Sister !
Yours Zainul

[Cryingkate]

Our tears say enough :-) Peace Friend

[zainul]

Eternal Peace and Love,Dear Friend :-)

[zainul]

Eternal Peace and Love,Dear Friend :-)

[Cryingkate]

I shall treasure them words and guard them in my hearts treasure chest for I know their value and may i also give you the same gift to hold,

[Tate Morgan]

It has been too cold here for the year to ever enjoy the flowers But i envy that of you

[zainul]

Thanks for sharing the honest feeling.
You need not be envious.
The world is now a small village.
The magnolia was found in a hotel compound of Nepal.
You may make a trip to a state of USA where climate is different and magnolia is blooming now.
Alternatively,you can view the beauty of this flower in a You Tube video and enjoy how lovely is the flower.
Have a nice time!

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome

[zainul]

My pleasure,dear friend.:)

[Ally Monique]

I love the comparisons you've made i this poem, it's so unique and refreshing
Lovely read
Thanks for sharing :)

[zainul]

I am very pleased by your wonderful review.
It has made my day.
Thank you Ally for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Ally Monique]

My pleasure! ^^

[Kelly Scheppers]

There is such beauty here in your expression, Zainul. I look forward to reading more!


My best,
Kelly

[zainul]

I feel very honored by your inspiring words,Kelly.
You are always welcome to my little world of verses.

[JenniferMarie]

Lovely poem. All the images transported me to a serene place. I also ponder many things when I look up at trees. Beautiful poem.

[zainul]

Thank you Jennifer for sharing your wonderful feelings upon reading the piece on magnolia.I love to converse with trees and flowers when I am alone.They seem to share many secrets when whisper my own.
I feel very honored and inspired by your lovely review.

[JenniferMarie]

You're welcome. I just love magnolia trees :) truly beautiful write.

[zainul]

I am very glad to know that you love magnolia trees.
They are my real passion for many many years.

[Lydia Shutter]

The magnolia blossom...so fragrant and quite beautiful. You have made her almost human here in this ode to the magnolia, Zainul! Very romantic and filled with lovely images. Lydi**

[zainul]

Thank you Lydia for stopping by to grace this ode to the magnolia.
I feel very blessed by your heartfelt review and compliments.

[Sheila Kline]

A collection of beautiful sentiments honoring one who is assuredly most deserving of the praise! Your heartfelt thank you is lovely!!

[zainul]

Thank you Sheila for stopping by to grace this piece.
I feel very honored too by your wonderful review.

[poetdoug]

Wow, this makes me appreciate even more the lovely Magnolia tree in our back yard.
Your description of the flowers being like 'white fairies' is PERFECT my friend.

[zainul]

Thank poetdoug for the encouraging review.
I feel very honored by your compliments.

[Marie]

THisis a lovely poem. Maagnolias are wonderful flowers...their white, pure petals and sweet smell. I had a magnolia bush once, and I wish I still had one to greet me in the morning.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for the lovely contribution.
This was a great experience for me in Nepal.
read moreThank you Marie for the lovely contribution.
This was a great experience for me in Nepal.
I saw the beauty of magnolia for the first time from very close distance.
Rain drops fell on the leaves creating an amazing scene after I uploaded the poem.

[Jon Roggie]

Beautiful. All I can say.

[zainul]

Thank you Jon for the wonderful review.

[DaughterNature]

This is sweet -- I love magnolia trees, too. I really like the imagery in the first stanza. I think the 2nd stanza needs some work, though. Reminding you of nostalgia seems a little redundant, and the term "art" is rather vague. I feel similarly about the 3rd stanza. I think you may have started out with an awesome idea and then been constricted by the rhyme scheme. You might try writing this as a straight letter to the magnolia tree, and then tailoring the letter into a poem that feels right to you -- you might discover some other winning images!

[zainul]

Thank you for the great contribution.
I tried to focus on beauty of natural things during travel.