Humankid

A humankid fell into trance

A humankid was playing in a garden

Her partner was a wonderful peahen

They bounced and chased each other

They acted the role of a lovely mother

The humankid stumbled on a hidden stone

She screamed for pain in the pelvic bone

The peahen was frightened by the accident

She called hummingbird for her treatment

The hummingbird came with first aid box

She hummed mantra with cunning fox

They massaged humankid with great care

Peahen flapped her wings for fresh air

Hearing tumult peacock rushed with peachicks

He gave good advice and showed great tricks

Humankid felt a little comfort by their nursing

Doctor hummingbird then started to sing

The parents of humankid heard the song

They thought something might be wrong

They came with neighbors for her aid

Humankid assured there was no raid

All became happy and started to dance

Humankid felt sleepy and fell into trance

Reviews

[Brittanie Bardwell]

I love how you portrayed humankind and nature together. Humankind needs nature and nature will be kind to humankind. I love the words used as humankind (an innocent childlike feature) is so connected with nature that her love for them and their love for her is so beautiful written. Great job!

[zainul]

I am once again blessed with an excellent review.
This inspired me a lot.
Thank you Brittanie for the favour.

[stars are far]

That was very greatly done, well done :)

[icelandicblue]

It felt like a lovely tale of the beginning of the world, like a porquoi tale. It's a very sweet poem.

[zainul]

Thank you Anne for enlightening and inspiring me with your sagacious words.
This is a world to me.
Have a nice time,dear poet.:)

[Marie]

This is such a nice story. I take it at face value, friendship between a child and animals, but you probably have a deeper meaning.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for the insightful review.
I am very pleased that you have taken its face value as well as contemplated a deeper meaning.
I adore your wisdom.

[Master K-tops]

Interesting concept. I did not quickly grasp it initially but now I do and I'm blown-away. If we can all find a way to live together in peace and harmony,life would be much easier. Great lesson. I'm glad I stumbled upon this really inspiring poem.

[zainul]

Thank you Master K-tops for stopping by to glorify this piece.
This means a world to me.

[luviva]

Coexistence huh?? What a wonderful world it would be if we all lived in harmony. No wild or domestic things... All a one happy living.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the lovely review.:)

[M.K. Jawdat]

Extremely beautiful poem so very good

[zainul]

Thank you Jawdat for the admiring review.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with coyote...finding one with nature, if we ever can do that...we will all dance, animals, nature and humans alike.

nicely penned.

[zainul]

Thank you dear Jacob for the great contribution.
Let's pray for such a great moment for dancing together with nature.
I am immensely inspired by your generous compliments.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like when nature and man can find peace in their kindness. I like the want to assist and the song to bring help. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[zainul]

I am very pleased to read your admiring review.
Thank you for the generous compliments.
I feel very blessed and honored by your kind gesture.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww my sweet friend .This is truly a beautiful and descriptive poem. I could see everything in my mind by your vivid details. Awesome as ever my dear Mr Zainul :)

[zainul]

Thank you Vidya for the inspiring review.
This is for the children and their caregivers.
I think they will enjoy this piece.
I am very happy that you came first to read this work.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome and I am honoured to be the first to read your lovely work.Children will love this and so did I.Have a blessed weekend my sweet friend :)

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for supporting me so strongly.
Let's work as a team to make a better world for our children.
The children need a decent lifestyle for their better future.
Have a wonderful weekend my lovely friend.:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wise advice my friend yes we will work as a team.Same to you :)

[zainul]

My pleasure dear friend.
Together we can make the world habitable for our children.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I believe this too ................:)

[zainul]

Thank you for your great gesture,dear friend.:)