Silence seems to be gold One should not be very bold The world loves a dumb It may be wise to remain calm
What else a humble person can do When selfish people worship ego Ignoring the call of humanity They defy vows and responsibility
It may be an offense to keep quiet In the case of violation of human right Tricks of players of the game of fortune Thwart the good people to lament soon
Opportunists embrace stooge but ignore wise person They can't stand opponents with noble mission
This is powerfully accurate and a cry for help in humanity. You worded it so well, I couldn't think of any way to say it better! When the wise stay quiet and let the fools run the show, humanity suffers. But this is so often the case, and the silence needs to be broken if we want to see change. Very powerful poem, definitely thought-provoking!
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Woow I never knew a person would feel that way. Your poem really showed the meaning that truth has to be heard and stand up. i really liked it. it kinda reminded of my father. He always was a coward in so many ways that even I wanted to make him stand out.
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Thank you Dina for sharing a precious characteristic of your father.
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"What else a humble person can do
When selfish people worship ego
Ignoring the call of humanity
They defy vows and responsibility"
Being a college student I feel the power of you words.
There are many egotistical people I encounter with frequency.
Perhaps it is because of the age,
but nevertheless your poem speaks a powerful truth.
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Silence is sometimes more powerful than a million words said. But as you rightly say, there are some occasions on which no good citizen of this world must keep quiet. And those with a noble mission must go on in the face of fierce opposition when they know they are right. Truth will stand. A very deep poem sir.
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Thank you Divya for your insightful review.
I agree with your precious statement,"Truth will s.. read moreThank you Divya for your insightful review.
I agree with your precious statement,"Truth will stand".
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There's wisdom in your words, Zainul. I am passionately in love with silence and I can relate to this very well.
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I am very glad to know that you are passionately in love with silence and you can relate to this very well.
Great write! The meaning behind is very strong and clear. I admire how you've managed to capture multiple thoughts and with them created a brilliant poem.
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Thank you Lexi for the insightful review and compliments.
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There is much truth in your last line:
They can't stand opponents with noble mission
People with noble missions are often conspired at and killed. This world is full of darkness, the same way it is made beautiful. Your piece is very thought-provoking and the structure of the poem is great. :)
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Thank you Eloisa for the insightful review.
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I am very glad that you analyzed the situation so nicely.
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