Delusion

The girl looked like a happy bird
She was a perfect beauty without any flaw
Her  manners matched with a nerd
Seeing her may give a feeling of awe

She rendered a sweet melodious song
She performed her task with perfection
Her words danced in my heart for long
I was fully  amazed by her dedication

I switched to a nearby spot after the event
Talking with other persons on related matter
Spending with them wonderful moment
I enjoyed the pleasant atmosphere

Suddenly the girl came  and stopped before me
She  wanted to ask a simple question
I  was wondering what her query could be
Then I gladly accorded my permission

She told me that she loved a handsome man
But he never responded to her passionate call
She thought about him again and again
She feared that she could not stop her fall

I became very pleased with her polite gesture
But failed to give her a perfect solution
Human mind is like an unknown pasture
That's why we have to live in delusion




 

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

This is simply amazing, Dear Poet, incredible imagery your words have captured,
Very descriptive in depicting these two characters, not to mention, the atmosphere.


Sometimes one needs to delusion themselves until they either have no choice
But to face reality, or find the strength to. Brilliantly insightful with both meter
And choice of words. It's always a pleasure to 're visit your work of art, zainul...
Pen on! 100/100

[zainul]

Hi Barrie,I feel very fortunate to read your wonderfully written heartfelt review.
Your review enlightened me on the causes of delusion.
Thank you dear friend for stopping by to glorify the work.
Have a nice time.:)

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, zainul, the pleasure was all mine to read! Thank you, you as well
Namaste :)

[hmarieee]

This was really such a great write. Good job my dear.

[zainul]

Thank you hannahmarie for the inspiring words.
I feel very honored by your great gesture.

[SimpleMind]

Uncertainty... and it's so painful.

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for the splendid review.

[Savannah Bly]

This is simply beautiful! It is a story and in a way even a delusion. I'll send a RR of one that I wrote, it deals with a similar subject of delusion.
A really great piece, Bravo!

[zainul]

Thank you Savannah for the insightful review.
I am very glad that you already worked with a similar subject of delusion.
I will soon read your work.

[Savannah Bly]

Thank you, I really enjoyed your poem. It was new insight on delusion from a different perspective than mine. Again, bravo!

[zainul]

Thank you for the great compliments.
I like to read your poem.
Please let me know its title.

[Savannah Bly]

"Escape your dreamed nightmare" sent you a RR (read request)

[Relic]

There are no answers when it comes to such matters I suppose. Even when we find someone who meets our needs and desires, things can become lost and despondent. Good poem.

[zainul]

Thank you relic for the wonderful review.
It warms my heart and inspires me to focus on such humane issues.

[Relic]

You'e welcome.

[R J Askew]

Ach, yes, the whole world is awash in delusions. Phps we need them to keep us going. And of course artists supply material for others to build their own delusions! I enjoyed the little tale in your poem.

[zainul]

I am very glad that you interpreted the piece in a splendid way.
It is very heartening to learn that you enjoyed the little tale in this poem.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[poetdoug]

Great write.
Reminds us all to be a good listener is often the best help that we can be to others.
Thanks for the creative reminder my friend

[zainul]

Thank you Doug for the inspiring review.
I am very glad that you extracted the essence of the work in such a nice manner.
This means a world to me.

[poetdoug]

You and your friendship means much to me.Godspeed to you.

[zainul]

My pleasure,dear friend.:)

[Gedalya]

"nerd" lol, Gotta love that bit.

[zainul]

Thank you Gedalya for the admiring review.:)

[Gedalya]

I look forward to reading more.

[zainul]

I feel very inspired, dear friend.:)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Wow. This was such a deep poem, so very good. Your poems always get me thinking. This one was so good, keep up the good work :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

We all live in delusion at some point in our lives. Good poem.

[zainul]

Thank you Brittany for stopping by to grace this piece.
This means a world to me.:)