Song

I enjoy song bath now

When mind dries like stone

Old song makes a pleasant pond

Song bath brings new life

Reviews

[Bri]

Simple, yet so wise. It holds very few words yet I can sense a greater message there. It has great meaning, It's awesome. Well done, friend.

[zainul]

I am very pleased to see you here.You have really made my day with your amazing review and compliments.
Wish you a very Happy New Year 2014!

[Praveeta]

A beautiful poem and is so true. Music has the power to heal and rejuvenate. Definitely one of my favourite reads so far.

[zainul]

Yes, music has the power to heal and rejuvenate. You have nicely explained the value of music in our life.I am very glad that you have taken time to read and review the piece.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for creating lovely poems. You are a great poet.

[zainul]

I am very much humbled by your generous words.
This is a real pleasure for mine.

[Ruth]

Oh, I like this...unique!
The ebb and flow of melody heals...
Lovely x

[zainul]

Thank you Poppy for liking this x

[Ruth]

My pleasure...

[Susannah Rae]

i absolutely love the simplicity of haikus. Having your word choice so strictly limited really forces us as writers to pick and choose our words with great care. your words are so lovely.

[zainul]

Susannah,I feel very much honored by your admiring review and generous compliments.
This means a world to me.

[Johanna]

You have the gift of creating magic with very few words.. you put it all between the lines, I wish I could do that. Wonderful write!! :))

[zainul]

Thank you Johanna for the inspiring words of compliments and admiring review.
This means a world to me.

[SAYED THANGAL]

three abstract things connected within three lines, mind, song and life. it has a far reaching effect.
all the best,
sayed thangal

[zainul]

Thank you Sayed for the insightful review.
It means a lot to me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

My dear Mr Zainul your words are so refreshing and sweet.

[zainul]

I feel very honored by your lovely compliments.
Thank you Vidya for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome dear friend:)

[Serenity]

simple, beautiful, and something that many can relate to. I like it. It's short, and pure of heart.

[zainul]

Thank you Serenity for the admiring review.
This means a world to me.

[char]

I can relate to that, given my current situation. I feel ideas have abandoned me, so I returned to the Café in hopes that this "old song" can bring me "new life." Simple, but meaningful words. Thank you, Zainul, for these words.

[zainul]

This admiring review has given me "new life".
Thank you Anna for stopping by and glorifying the piece.

[Rachelle]

Memories are what we interpret them to be....hope all yours are good!

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the nice review and wishes.:)