Beauty

The beauty greets with smile

Beauty greets like queen

Her smile brings joy among fans

Enjoy pleasing chat

Reviews

[Catherine Frain]

Short this may be, but it gets across a powerful message. Treat your girl right, and she'll treat you right. A shining star among all others, who calls to you and invites you for a chat. I loved this poem. It is short, but it is a sweet poem that would lose it's admiring words if it were any longer.

[zainul]

I adore your admiring review and insightful analysis.
This means a world to me.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Rachelle]

What is beauty? What is being queenly? To ascribe such labels on a female well-formed physically would do injustice to millions of women who have beauty within but because they sacrifice time and themselves for those they love have little opportunity to primp and preen. To be queenly is to show compassion and kindness to others more so if one is blessed. Beyond the concept of beauty presented by crass commercialism and media, let us try to find the queens and the beauties in the women all around us.

[Cryingkate]

:-) ...................

[Praveeta]

A sweet poem from a creative writer.

[zainul]

Thank you Praveeta for the great compliments.
This means a world to me.

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome.

[Cassie]

A very sweet poem, already makes me smile.

[zainul]

Thank you for enjoying the piece.
I feel very happy when my friends in WC smile while reading my work.

[Judy]

Interesting haiku - sounds a little liturgical as well

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful review.
This means a lot to me.

[MsJewel]

You have shared a wonderful message in just a few words. :) Julie

[zainul]

I feel very glad that glorified this piece.
Your smile brings joy among fans.

[Criss Sole]

Very short and sweet. I really enjoyed it.

[zainul]

Thanks for stopping by to glorify this piece.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

You don't have to have a lot to say to say this much. If it's a real person, she must be the shining star in the room. Very simple and sweet.

[zainul]

Thank you Elizabeth for the nice words.
Yes,she must be the shining star in the room.

[Marie]

I wonder who she is, with the beautiful smile...?

[zainul]

She is here.
She is around us.
She must be smiling now.