Happy anniversary,Angi!!!

Wish the happy conjugal life of Angi!

 

Two lovely birds sing sweet bridal song
They have to live together for too long

Wish your divine relationship live for ever
Greet you with verses and red red flower

A pair of flower among green leaves of palm
They smile together and spread their charm

He tried hard to hide behind your slender shoulder.
Your smile won him and made him happy for ever.

 

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Lovely. There is an Eastern myth about two birds together, isn't there? The 'something or other' birds,I have forgotton what they were called. But I beieve they had children who created new worlds. Do you know the myth I mean? I think it may be CHinese.

[zainul]

Yea,I remember that there is myth about two birds together.
I will find the myth later.
Thanks for the lovely review.:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Do let me know if you find out!

[zainul]

Sure,I will let you know.
That will be a great point for all writers.

[icelandicblue]

Oh this is sweet and Angi is one of the nicest people on the site. Congrats Ami and I hope that you have many more years of happiness to come. This was such a nice thing to do zainul. The lady deserves some recognition for such an accomplishment.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for commending Angi so highly.
Yes,the lady deserves recognition for her accomplishment.
I hope Angi will be very happy to read your amazing note.

[Vidya Bacchus]

hello my dear Mr Zainul you write soo beautifully thank you for sharing your beautiful words.

[zainul]

Vidya,I am very much honored by your sincere appreciation.
I can't find proper words to reciprocate your compliments.
Thanks for the kind favor.

[Vidya Bacchus]

same to you kind Mr Zainul

[zainul]

This is our mutual pleasure.
Let's enjoy writing and reading.

[EloisaWrites]

This is just so sweet. I especially love how you open this poem. :)

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely review.
I am immensely inspired by your contribution.

[Renée]

Awww I just saw this one...sweet tribute to a Sweet Poetess and her forever sweetheart ( :

[zainul]

Thank you Renée for joining to wish the Sweet Poetess.:)
I feel very honored to get you here to grace this piece with your admiring review.

[Renée]

I looked at the date this came out..I was in the middle of a very big project..otherwise I would have caught it on time A pleasure to add my cheers ( :

[zainul]

Very nice of madam.
This is really a great pleasure for us all to greet for each other.
Have a nice time,dear poet.:)

[wordman]

you painted a beautiful picture here
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[zainul]

Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
Zainul

[Rita L. Sev]

Such a nice gesture, and a beautiful poem, Zainul!

[zainul]

Thank you Rita for the inspiring review and compliments.

[Joyce S. Greene]

What a lovely poem you have written for Angi's anniversary, Zainul. I can see she appreciated it very much. I especially liked the verse, "A pair of flower among green leaves of palm/They smile together and spread their charm" - a very beautiful metaphor for the love they have shared for many years.

[zainul]

Thank you Joyce for the wonderful review.
Please visit the photos of Angi to read my comments on her photos.
I wrote comments on the photos and combined them as this piece.

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Well that was sweet:) zainul

[zainul]

Thank you Jonathan for the wonderful review.:)

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Very welcome you write with a high end glare Zainul:) I don't know what to say but have read a few of your works last night:)

[zainul]

I feel very happy that you felt so high about my writes.:)
This means a world to me.
Thank you for your generosity.:)

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Very welcome just sometimes im lost for words lol

[zainul]

This happens with me too.:)
I love your kind gesture.
So,we can communicate through the hearts.:)

[Tom]

A splendid anniversary tribute, well penned zainul and congratulations Angi !

[zainul]

Thank you Tom for joining the writers to congratulate Angi on her Anniversary.
I thank you for the compliment too.:)