Nature

When internet goes and miss my online friends

I feel very bad and  wait to see how it ends

Sometimes the connection comes  very soon

Then I think it this is a great boon

But,sometimes the internet does not come for hours

Then I curse for  everything and look for others

Today I lost the internet connection

I got angry and restless for genuine reason

 

Waiting for sometime  cursing the  service provider

I went to the veranda to take some fresh air

Looked down my flat to the plot cleared recently

For building a large  apartment  complex matching the city

Various plants and grasses grew on the vacant land

A piece of oasis came from nowhere by some magic wand

In the middle of the lovely forest  there was a little pond

Flowers of water lily bloomed there to create friendly bond

 

More scenes awaited me in the mundane garden

Many butterflies were flying in the flowery den

Suddenly a mongoose came into my sight

It was joined by several others from left and right

They were playing   special game that charmed my eyes

I thought a snake might be around to give me  surprise

At this point three jolly  kids rushed to the plot

The furry mammals ran away into a hidden slot

 

I became happy by the events and started to ponder

Nature is the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder

 

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Unplugging is an enriching experience. It makes us see that the world does not revolve around our phones or televisions. My favorite line in the poem is when you describe the garden as mundane. Such a simple choice of words, but it feels like you are still angry and are hesitating to accept the beautiful gift of nature. Thank you for a jolly piece

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful review.
Your interpretation of my mood at that time is really enjoyable.
I feel very honored by your great compliments.:)

[Star]

I am a little confused on the association the trouble with the internet and then all of the sudden these animals and things of nature pop up?

[zainul]

Thank you for expressing your confusion on the association.I tried to explain it here.Would you please look here to find the association.If it is not clear here,I will try to explain later.Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
"Then I think it this is a great boon
But,sometimes the internet does not come for hours
Then I curse for everything and look for others
Today I lost the internet connection
I got angry and restless for genuine reason

Waiting for sometime cursing the service provider
I went to the veranda to take some fresh air
Looked down my flat to the plot cleared recently
For building a large apartment complex matching the city
Various plants and grasses grew on the vacant land
A piece of oasis came from nowhere by some magic wand
In the middle of the lovely forest there was a little pond
Flowers of water lily bloomed there to create friendly bond"

[Star]

oh...got you...lol....the internet drove you nuts and then you walked away to take a breath and found peace of mind in something else that took your mind away from it so to speak...That s what I got from it...I just had to read it more deeply is all...

[zainul]

This is my pleasure that you got it. Yes, the internet drove me nuts and then happened the events leading to my peace of mind.
Thank you Star for being so inspiring and supportive.:)

[Ruth]

This is sensational! Enjoyed every line and image, just stunning :)

[zainul]

Thank you Poppy for the inspiring review.
This means a world to me.

[Ruth]

Most welcome!

[Adam Crate]

I really enjoyed reading this poem! The first two lines seemed funny to me; I haven't read many poems about the internet. As it progressed it actually became quite profound. There's a lot of meaning concealed in these lines and I think you did an excellent job conveying it.

[zainul]

Thank you Adam for the admiring review.
I am personally very unhappy about the performance of internet connectivity in my country.
I miss many blessings of internet.
However,I missed the blessing of nature for being so addictive to internet.
I am very happy that you have taken time to read and review this piece.

[Angi]

I try to get outside away from the electronics some every single day. It sounds like the internet going down ended up being a wonderful thing after all. Nicely done, Zainul. Angi~

[zainul]

Thank you Angi for sharing your lovely approach to get down to nature.
I have to follow your example.
But,internet has overwhelmed us.It entangled us like the tentacles of octopus.
It is really difficult to free from the tentacles.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Prritiy]

nature does soothe away our worries we just have to 'look' at her :)

best wishes

[zainul]

Right you are.
Nature does soothe away our worries.
we just have to 'look' at her :)
read moreRight you are.
Nature does soothe away our worries.
we just have to 'look' at her :)
Very enlightening feedback,dear friend.

[Prritiy]

:)))))))))

[Latifa]

i loved it the last verses were really good

[zainul]

Thank you Latifa for the wonderful review.:)

[Tiffany Boles]

Oh wow, I love the way you put this together. The rhymes flow so well, and have great imagery that follows them. Nice write :)!

[zainul]

Thank you Tiffany for the very inspirational review.
This reflects how frustration could be transformed into a creative thing.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.
It means a world to me.

[Tiffany Boles]

You're welcome :)

[zainul]

My pleasure,dear friend.:)

[Devanshu Rajput]

You presented this poetry giving reader the clear view from the boring times of yours to the one wonderful moments.

Fluidity of writing really led me to merriment that you wanted to express.

Nature, nurtures us like a mother. It is not less than a treasure for every human being. It in every aspect of life is wonderful.

[zainul]

Devanshu,I am very pleased to read your wonderful observation.
I also feel the merriment with you.
Yes,nature, nurtures us like a mother.
We are really blessed by the affection of nature.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Devanshu Rajput]

You are welcome.

[Rick Puetter]

A wonderful piece, Zainul. You are right, there is so much beauty in nature and we often forget this while sitting behind our computers. We need to get out more often and walk the land, view the sky, wet our toes in the ocean.

Very best regards,

Rick

[zainul]

Yes,we are being crippled in the heart dealing with machines.
I completely agree with you that we need to get out more often and walk the land, view the sky, wet our toes in the ocean.
Thanks for the very inspiring review.
This has immensely enhanced my strength.

[Rick Puetter]

You are most welcome.