Nature

When internet goes and miss my online friends

I feel very bad and  wait to see how it ends

Sometimes the connection comes  very soon

Then I think it this is a great boon

But,sometimes the internet does not come for hours

Then I curse for  everything and look for others

Today I lost the internet connection

I got angry and restless for genuine reason

 

Waiting for sometime  cursing the  service provider

I went to the veranda to take some fresh air

Looked down my flat to the plot cleared recently

For building a large  apartment  complex matching the city

Various plants and grasses grew on the vacant land

A piece of oasis came from nowhere by some magic wand

In the middle of the lovely forest  there was a little pond

Flowers of water lily bloomed there to create friendly bond

 

More scenes awaited me in the mundane garden

Many butterflies were flying in the flowery den

Suddenly a mongoose came into my sight

It was joined by several others from left and right

They were playing   special game that charmed my eyes

I thought a snake might be around to give me  surprise

At this point three jolly  kids rushed to the plot

The furry mammals ran away into a hidden slot

 

I became happy by the events and started to ponder

Nature is the treasure of beauty and infinite wonder

 

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Unplugging is an enriching experience. It makes us see that the world does not revolve around our phones or televisions. My favorite line in the poem is when you describe the garden as mundane. Such a simple choice of words, but it feels like you are still angry and are hesitating to accept the beautiful gift of nature. Thank you for a jolly piece

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful review.
Your interpretation of my mood at that time is really enjoyable.
I feel very honored by your great compliments.:)

[Cryingkate]

I loved the walk you shared with us in the Garden and loved the love you described found in the nature.
Yes nature to me is the Breath of Spirit found in all living things.
Here, there, everywhere. The breath of God.

[zainul]

Thank you Connie for stopping by and grace the piece with your wonderful review.
I close my eyes and try to see what divine events were happening in the Garden below my flat on the day of writing the poem.
Have a nice day,dear friend.:)

[Cryingkate]

You did a wonderful job. I enjoy also when you share how the inspirations come to your writings.
read moreYou did a wonderful job. I enjoy also when you share how the inspirations come to your writings.
It deepens the understanding and connection even more.
Now I have an image to go with it.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the inspiring compliments.:)

[Joiedevivre]

so true! in this day and age, we get so entangled in our online and indoor life at times that we forget the wonders and beauty and life that await for us outside. sometimes it takes a connection drop, to become reconnected! Very nice :)

[zainul]

Thanks for the inspiring review.
I appreciate your lovely words and compliments.

[Jeff]

Great work. Very lighthearted with an excellent message.

[zainul]

Thanks for stopping by grace to grace this piece.
This means a world to me.

[Jeff]

You're very welcome!

[zainul]

My pleasure,talented writing friend.:)

[Jon Roggie]

I am spoiled. Nice write. Still, I just tell my stories to those around!

[zainul]

Thank you Jon.
I am very pleased by your lovely review.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Your final words sealed this piece, securing your message within the poem. nature is my favorite topic to write about so enjoyed this one.

[zainul]

I feel very glad that I met a pure nature lover in this site.
I already enjoyed some of your works.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
As for myself, I would rather have nature than the Net. I can hear and see the hand of the Great Mystery there. I have trouble finding that same serenity on a flat screen made by man. I enjoyed your write.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[zainul]

Dear Laughing-Bear,
This inspiring review has made my day.
I feel very glad that this piece was enjoyable one.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
Blessing,Zainul

[seraphicAlisah]

I am only a novice writer and
obviously, I don't know how to give reviews and comments about other people's works.
But this poem, as I was reading this, I realized that most of the time, we tend to forget about the beauty of our nature and our surroundings because we are so much entangled with just having our internet.
this is a good piece ^^.

[zainul]

I am very impressed Alisah by your wonderful review.
I am feeling that an angel is inspiring me with her smiling gesture.
Have a nice time,my young friend ^^.

[Sioranth Smith]

I was chuckling as I started reading this because I certainly know the frustration of an uncooperative internet! I love the message though and agree that we could all stand to "unplug" more and remember the world outside.

[zainul]

Thanks Sioranth for your admiring review and strong support to my message.
I am very pleased that you stopped by to grace this piece.

[Will Neill]

Zainul,what would we do without the internet, it certainly has made the world a smaller place. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Will

[zainul]

You are very right,Will.Internet has certainly made the world a smaller place.It would not be possible to know you had there be no internet.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.