Living

Living with the least

Few drops of water

Made me fresh and happy soon

Seek least for living

Reviews

[Belle]

Of all the many choices of subject, why water?
I think we all know the fact that we can live without the other basic necessities but not without water for three days. So, I see this as not just living with less, but living with what is only important. A good choice in life...

[zainul]

Thank you for the wonderful interpretation and admiring review.
This means a lot to me.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Tate Morgan]

Beautiful contrite immaculate. Those are the words i think of when I read this . You capture the essence of life and the formula for happiness take less than you give

[zainul]

Dear friend,
You have the generosity to explore the attributes in this piece.
I feel very blessed by your admiring review.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Aethereal]

This is really insightful! It inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you that is somewhat like it. Sometimes too much of a good thing is bad:

Drops

Mud will choke a seed.
Don’t sprout flowers with a flood.
Drops shall fill their need.

[zainul]

Hi Aethereal,you have given me such a sweet drop of honey!
I adore you lovely friend.
Accepted your heartfelt compliments.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! This poem would never have been written without the inspiration from the original.

[zainul]

This is a great partnership indeed.
We live by our mutual love.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Be happy with what you have
Things.. are not important
Keep it simple .. smile
Breath is a blessing ...

Wonderful ... Jazz

[zainul]

I feel very blessed that you wrote such a precious note.
Simple is beautiful.
Adore your wonderful review,dear friend.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

There is depth in everything you write .. .. J.

[zainul]

Thanks for the compliments.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

You r welcome ..

[Strider Marcus Jones]

Excellent short poem full of meaning. 100/100

[zainul]

I am really very excited to get the highest marks.
Thank you, dear friend, for your kind compliments and great favor.

[ms. barrie]

So few lines, zainul, and you managed to capture with your wonderful choice of words,
Profound enlightenment. Water to survive, cleanse, wipe away Dusty memories at the end of the day.
Lovely poem you penned, Dear Poet :)

[zainul]

Barrie,thank you for the lovely words.I feel the warmth of your admiration.
I really feel infinite joy.Thanks for stopping by,dear friend.:)

[ms. barrie]

Awe, you're very welcomed, zainul, anytime, always a pleasure to visit
Your side of the cafe, and likewise! Will be sure to visit again soon, dear friend,
Namaste :)

[zainul]

This is really a great pleasure that we always enjoy mutual trust and friendship.
This piece came after long period of unproductive time.Your welcoming compliments made be as happy as the precious drops of water.
Have a nice time,my wonderful friend.:)

[ms. barrie]

Thank you zainul, it's those such as yourself that light this"cafe" up a little brighter :)
Yes I am grateful and for our true friendship & mutual respect for each other.
Enjoy your day/ week as well, my wonderful friend :)

[zainul]

I am very pleased that we strive to keep this cafe vibrant for our own interest.
This is the safe heaven for writers of all ages.

[Marie]

A few droops of water in the desert make all the difference...

[zainul]

This is very true,Marie.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A very profound minimalist poem. Yes, less is often more!

[zainul]

Thank you dear poet for stopping to inspire this piece by your admiring review.
This means a world to me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this...in a nutshell...short and sweet....it not only shows in words but in form and length that some people can actually be happy with very little...and that is a sweet thought, my poet friend.

[zainul]

I feel very honored that you appreciated my humble efforts.
This means a world to me.
Thanks for stopping by.

[Lydia Shutter]

Those who can find happiness in the small things in life are truly the fortunate ones. What a strong life message you have packed into just three lines here. Very well written. lydi**

[zainul]

Thank you Lydi for being the first to inspire me for this humble piece.
Your admiring review means a lot for me.
Thank you for stopping by dear friend.:)