Inspired by the extraordinary performance of a female reciter
The lady was a little shy When I requested her to recite But her heart wanted to try The poem that hovered day and night
She started with low voice Her face started to change Signs of sorrow and rejoice Were shown to interchange
Now,she was another person Her voice rendered artistic narration She performed a special session She was transformed to an incarnation
Recitation was her passion She recited poems for years Once a poem created impression She recited it with tears
A poem is the product of poet's passion The reciter presents it to the people Poet and reciter belongs to the same mission The message of the poem spreads like ripple
I admire the partnership of poets and reciters for creativity Both of them have great devotion Together they work for the betterment of humanity The world should acknowledge their contribution
Wow. I loved this poem of yours!
I loved the last stanza ALOT!
" I admire the partnership of poets and reciters for creativity
Both of them have great devotion
Together they work for the betterment of humanity
The world should acknowledge their contribution ".
It's true, there is no better companionship than with writers/ readers.
I love your passion and your enthusiasm for a better world :)
keep going! and we will keeps reading.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend for stopping by and inspire me by your admiring review.
This means a wor.. read moreThank you dear friend for stopping by and inspire me by your admiring review.
This means a world to me.
I feel very blessed by your assurance for reading.
Thanks for the compliments too.
Zainul, Some people have the talent of writing others the gift of speech. When two combine in unision art is born. Good work.
Will
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11 Years Ago
I am very charmed by your generosity.
This is a really great pleasure that you took time to re.. read moreI am very charmed by your generosity.
This is a really great pleasure that you took time to read and review a number of my works in a very short time.
I am very much inspired by your noble gesture.:)
this is so beautiful! it tells such a story, one that i can relate to well. i am so intrigued by speakers such as the one you've described. it is amazing to find a partnership that works in such harmony. thank you for sharing this piece
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Marina for the admiring review.
I am very pleased that you appreciated the partnersh.. read moreThank you Marina for the admiring review.
I am very pleased that you appreciated the partnership between the writer and the reciter.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.
Wow. I loved this poem of yours!
I loved the last stanza ALOT!
" I admire the partnership of poets and reciters for creativity
Both of them have great devotion
Together they work for the betterment of humanity
The world should acknowledge their contribution ".
It's true, there is no better companionship than with writers/ readers.
I love your passion and your enthusiasm for a better world :)
keep going! and we will keeps reading.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend for stopping by and inspire me by your admiring review.
This means a wor.. read moreThank you dear friend for stopping by and inspire me by your admiring review.
This means a world to me.
I feel very blessed by your assurance for reading.
Thanks for the compliments too.
A truly beautiful poem, zainul. You conveyed so well the lady's emotional reaction to your poetry and the imporatance of both the poet and the reciter in the conveyance of the poem to others. This is a great write.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Joyce for stopping by to grace this piece.
Your admiring review inspired me immensel.. read moreThank you Joyce for stopping by to grace this piece.
Your admiring review inspired me immensely.
Have a nice time in writing and reviewing.
Hi, again. I think, you are a very deep and emotional writer,. You are blessed with words that convey your deepest feelings. I hope that you continue. Your words spread a message that is received by many of us. Bless you.
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Hi Daffy,I can't express how happy I am at this moment in the morning.
You have glorified my .. read moreHi Daffy,I can't express how happy I am at this moment in the morning.
You have glorified my day.I got your wonderful inspirational review just after opening my computer this morning.
I accept your love and blessing gratefully.
Have a nice time,dear poet.
Great composition. I like the grand idea placed into a 24 line 6-4 stanza double inlay of repetition with less than 30 words. Crisp and stark like an ikea table.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend for analyzing the piece with such sincerity.
I feel very honored.
.. read moreThank you dear friend for analyzing the piece with such sincerity.
I feel very honored.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
I really could see a shy lady standing up in front of a large group of people reciting her artful words. I've read many of my poems in front of people many times although I do not like it, it helps me to be more confident. I really do love this piece it's inspiring and motivating :)
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11 Years Ago
You have perfectly depicted the event,dear poet.
I feel very blessed and honored for recreati.. read moreYou have perfectly depicted the event,dear poet.
I feel very blessed and honored for recreating the scene where you recited yourself.
I can imagine the beauty of the shyness of a reciter.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.:)
I'm glad I paused... it was good to listen to your words again my friend.
Take care,
Chris
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11 Years Ago
I'm very pleased you paused.
Me and my words are glorified by your golden touch.
Have a.. read moreI'm very pleased you paused.
Me and my words are glorified by your golden touch.
Have a nice time,dear friend.
Zainul
this is beautiful my favourite lines are "a poem is the product of poet's passion The reciter presents it to the people" very elegant and truthfully written, great job! :)
Thank you Heather for taking time and writing such an inspiring review.
This means a world to .. read moreThank you Heather for taking time and writing such an inspiring review.
This means a world to me.:)