My Lost Bird

I lost my bird and found her again

This is my bird
Once I lost her for lack of care
I regret quite hard
I confess it was not at all fair

A good bird is a part of life
She gives company in joy and strife

She flew away for my neglect again and again
I was the reason for her infinite pain

I don't know if she cursed me
I don't know how she got free

Now she frolics among the trees
Her beauty is always on increase

Come back my lost bird,come back soon
We will live together under sun and moon

 

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

Your poem makes us realize of our often made mistakes. At first we don't care about our possessions. But, when the possessed thing gets out of our reach, we regret of our mistake.

I can get you, longing for a bird that you lost.

An another great write.

Pen on.

Devanshu

[zainul]

Thank you Devanshu for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
I am immensely inspired by this.
This means a world to me.

[Kimberlee]

This is beautiful. It leaves a lasting impression of hope.

[zainul]

Thank you Bee for taking time and review the piece.

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Zainul, this was a wonderfully written poem. I think things, (people, animals, possessions) are so much taken advantage of, now a days. You don't truly realize how to treat someone, treat something, until it's out of your reach and you can't take back what's already been done. That's why it's so important to treat things how you'd like to be treated. I think the world would be a very happy place if more people did that. Well done again, my dear friend :) Your words continue to inspire me.

[zainul]

Your interpretation is priceless.Yes,proper treatment at proper time is very important.It is almost impossible to get everything back as before once improper treatment was done.Your sagacious review inspired me immensely.Thank you Maggie for stopping by to grace this piece.

[❤ Maggie ❤]

It was my pleasure :) I love reading your poems. And yes, that's very true. It's hard o get things back to normal once they change

[Karen]

As much as I hate to quote overused cliches and adages, it's true that you don't know what you have until it's gone, though in this case it's not so much about the bird being gone but about the bird no longer being with the narrator. I think it's harder to deal with someone who has left us but whom we still see than someone who last left and we never see again. Great poem!

[zainul]

Thank you Karen for exposing the wound so nicely.Yes,you are very correct to point out that it's harder to deal with someone who has left us but whom we still see than someone who last left and we never see again.Seeing the one around is like salt on the wound for the person who was already hurt by some incident.Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece by the insightful review.:)

[Karen]

It is a beautiful piece and my intention is never to expose your wounds or your hurts... poetry helps us expel those.

[zainul]

Thank you again for the great contribution.I was referring to the probable psychological reactions taking place in someone's mind.I am not taking it personally.Just talking about the science lying under the phenomenon.
I appreciate your wonderful comment that poetry helps us expel hurts.
I feel very honored and blessed for your contributions.

[Karen]

The honor is mine for being able to read your poetry!

[zainul]

Your wonderful reviews always give me immense pleasure and inspiration.
Thank you dear poet for being so kind.

[Praveeta]

A beautiful poem. Liked the message that we should appreciate what we have and take care of it before it's too late.

[zainul]

Thank you Praveela for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.:)

[Praveeta]

Your are most welcome. Your writing is amazing.

[Lexi Richard]

It seems like a simple poem at first glance, but it has so much depth and meaning behind it once you read and decipher each line. I really adore this piece, it's beautifully written. Had me captured by the first line.

[zainul]

Thank you Lexi for taking time to read and review the piece.
Your insightful review gives me immense strength and inspiration.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Lydia Shutter]

We must appreciate everything we have and not take things for granted...a wise life lesson in this one, Zainul. Good rhyming throughout. Lydi**

[zainul]

Thank you Lydia for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review. This means a lot to me.

[Henryglass]

Thanks for reminding us that the things we loose increase in worth over time and although their absence torments us, it's the memories that always keep us warm and balanced in a crazy world. Beautiful writing.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend.:)
I am very glad that you have considered this piece with such depth.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.

[Jeff]

Very nice work. I think most of us can relate to this subject matter.

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review.
This is a world to me.
Thanks for relating to this subject matter.

[Star]

This is my favorite of yours so far. I like how you compared things and how you rhymed and it all made sense and worked together in a nice flow

[zainul]

Thank you Star for the wonderful review.
I can't express how happy I am to read your insightful observation.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Nijura]

very nice ..the end make me smile :-)

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely review :-)