They should all the more be celebrated for making it in such a harsh, difficult world. Those who were lucky enough to make it and those who were not...they all deserve our love, respect and regard. Great and noble thoughts from you Zainul sir. My compliments.
Dear Divya,
Thanks for the thoughtful contribution.
Yes,they all deserve our love, respe.. read moreDear Divya,
Thanks for the thoughtful contribution.
Yes,they all deserve our love, respect and regard.
I am very glad that you stopped by to grace this piece.:)
Such a well written poem. Very creative and I so like the theme of the poem. Life is harder for the handicapped in so many ways. Encouragement and help should be given to them and to all to go forth in the world and seek out your dreams. Fantastic poem!
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Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
You have correctly po.. read moreThank you for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
You have correctly pointed out that life is harder for the handicapped in so many ways.
They really need encouragement and help.All people without any disability should extend their support to the handicapped ones.
Hi zainul. A beautiful write and message. Well crafted free style metered rhyming couplets which I enjoy. Lovely imagery and descriptives. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm and use of enjambment. Nice use of simile. Rhyme is good. Good depth of feeling; encouraging and uplifting. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good closing lines. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on!
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I feel very blessed and honored that you reviewed the piece with so many positive parameters.
.. read moreI feel very blessed and honored that you reviewed the piece with so many positive parameters.
This means a world to me.
Thank you Shelley for stopping by to grace piece.
Such a lovely poem dedicated to very deserving and brave people. This poem speak much about you as a person, zainul. Great work!
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Thank you Lourisa for the admiring review and wonderful compliments.:)
This means a world to m.. read moreThank you Lourisa for the admiring review and wonderful compliments.:)
This means a world to me.
a avery beautiful poem about hope for those feel that life is not in his site and how it is important to work hard to make one's dream real
I enjoyed it
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Thank you Aseel for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.:)
This means a .. read moreThank you Aseel for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.:)
This means a world to me.
I am very glad you feel like that and you liked the piece.
This is really my pleasure that you.. read moreI am very glad you feel like that and you liked the piece.
This is really my pleasure that you stopped by to grace this piece.
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You are my teacher and I learn from you.
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I feel very pleased and honored by your polite expression.
I pray for your prosperity, dear p.. read moreI feel very pleased and honored by your polite expression.
I pray for your prosperity, dear poet.
I missed the adding of this, my friend and I am sorry. :(
The beauty in your writes comes from the light that shines brightly inside you. Always you are giving a little here and there of it to shine upon another.
As others have said, we are all handicapped in our ways.There are so many with major disabilities of one type or another that refuse to give up or give in. They deserve nothing less than our respect for that.
Wonderful piece. :)
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Dear friend,you need not be sorry for inadvertently missing the piece.
Yes,I agree with you a.. read moreDear friend,you need not be sorry for inadvertently missing the piece.
Yes,I agree with you and all others that we are all handicapped in our ways.
We have great respect for those who strive hard to win despite disabilities.
Thank you dear friend for stopping by to grace this piece.
A most touching piece really that the negates the edges of our own reasoning and thoughts - where we sometimtes stop to short, well done, good read.
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Thank you Thomas for enlightening review.
This means a world to me.
Thank you for stoppi.. read moreThank you Thomas for enlightening review.
This means a world to me.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.