I was surprised by the sweet words of the little child She was standing on the staircase holding the railing She was a sweet little girl and her look was mild I looked at her and wondered if she was ailing
But,she was in good health and looked quite bright She requested me in fondling voice to call her mother She told me that she was alone in home and took fright Looking around I found none to look after her
I wanted to comfort her through words for some time Asked her name and tried to make her smile She told her name and recited a nursery rhyme I thought that her mother would come in a while
She looked happy and I thought to leave her alone I assured her that her mother would come soon But,she was not ready to see me gone I became surprised again as I was not at all known
She wanted someone to stay with her for protection I felt very pleased to see the wit of the little girl She knew how to capture someone's attention I wanted to call her as a lovely blessed pearl
My waiting with the little girl did not last too long I heard footsteps on the staircase sometime later A woman came hurriedly and felt something wrong The girl's face became brighter and she looked better
I told her mother that the child was gripped by fear Her mother looked strangely as if nothing happened The holy child sought caress and tried to cheer I felt relaxed to think that the crisis came to the end
To tell the truth I recently started reading the poems except russian poets.
So creativity foreign poets is new for me, at least without being translated into Russian :) I really like your poem.
Children are the symbol of innocence and you created the image of infinite light.
Reading your poem helped me to forget about some sad things. Thank you very much
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11 Years Ago
I feel very blessed and honored by your inspiring review and generous compliments.
This is rea.. read moreI feel very blessed and honored by your inspiring review and generous compliments.
This is really a pleasure to learn that reading my poem helped you to forget about some sad things.
Thank you Kattie for stopping by to grace this piece.
It is quite fantastic how a short and unexpected meeting between two people can leave such a significant impression and thus inspire a person to write a poem about it. What a lovely read :) Thank you for sharing the experience.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Michelle for the admiring review and heartfelt compliments.
I feel very honored and .. read moreThank you Michelle for the admiring review and heartfelt compliments.
I feel very honored and blessed by your thoughtful contribution.
This means a world to me.
This was a lovely read with lots of emotion that really helped the reader visualize and experience the situation!
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Thank you Olivia for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a w.. read moreThank you Olivia for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a world to me.
To tell the truth I recently started reading the poems except russian poets.
So creativity foreign poets is new for me, at least without being translated into Russian :) I really like your poem.
Children are the symbol of innocence and you created the image of infinite light.
Reading your poem helped me to forget about some sad things. Thank you very much
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I feel very blessed and honored by your inspiring review and generous compliments.
This is rea.. read moreI feel very blessed and honored by your inspiring review and generous compliments.
This is really a pleasure to learn that reading my poem helped you to forget about some sad things.
Thank you Kattie for stopping by to grace this piece.
Aww, this was so sweet! I simply adore children, so this was such a joy to read. She sounds very lovely. :)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
I saw the girl last evening with her parents.Sh.. read moreThank you dear friend for the admiring review.
I saw the girl last evening with her parents.She looked at me with joy as she was riding on a motorbike to somewhere.She looked like a happy bird.I saw her going away and felt very good.
Then I went my way for a visit to a home a relative with my family.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.
You were right to stay by her side until a parent appeared. I would have done the same thing :-) This is a beautiful story.
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Thanks for the appreciation.
I feel so good to have your kind support.
I also feel very .. read moreThanks for the appreciation.
I feel so good to have your kind support.
I also feel very optimistic knowing that the world is still a place of love and compassion.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.:)
Thank you Maggie for the lovely words.
I am very inspired.
I am very glad that it really.. read moreThank you Maggie for the lovely words.
I am very inspired.
I am very glad that it really made you smile. :)
Thank you Sam for stopping by to grace this piece by your admiring review.:)
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Any time my friend. I always love to see the world through the eyes of another poet. It is always a .. read moreAny time my friend. I always love to see the world through the eyes of another poet. It is always a real treat.
zainul, you never cease to amaze me with your heart-felt gift for story-telling. Very poignant and enlightening write. This is wonderfully descriptive with pleasing fluidity. Thanks for sharing! Pen on! :)
Barrie,I am very happy to read your wonderful review again.
I am always inspired by your lovel.. read moreBarrie,I am very happy to read your wonderful review again.
I am always inspired by your lovely notes.
This time your words came as a pleasant shower after a prolong drought.
Thanks a lot,dear friend.
Illuminate us by your talented presence.:)
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You're very welcome'd zainul, this was a pleasure to read. Aw, thank you! As far as writing goes, wo.. read moreYou're very welcome'd zainul, this was a pleasure to read. Aw, thank you! As far as writing goes, words have become too elusive for now me and my muse took a vacation. Looking forward to more of your writes, zainul, pen on! :))
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edit: elusive for me now. something like that, i think? :)