Winner

Life can't be valueless

Life is a blessing

Its beauty grows forever

Love to see winners

Reviews

[areawakening]

Very thoughtful poem. Many people never realize how much of a blessing life is, and with or without our awareness its beauty does continue to grow forever. The last line is interesting, considering it includes the titular word "winner". I'm trying to wrap my head around what last message you are trying to convey here. Is it that we are all winners, because we all have the blessing of life? Is it a fragment of "I love to see winners"? Perhaps my favorite play on this last line is: "Love, to see winners." I'd be interested to hear the sentiments of the author!

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful thoughts.
You have nicely expressed my point of view.
Learned reviewers explained it from their point of views.
I think everyone has full right to consider a poem from her/his particular situation.
If the author fully describes his actual background or interpretation,the learned readers might
feel a little hurt.
Thank you Mitchell for the precious contribution.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Life is more than we'll appreciate. Splendid read and write.

[zainul]

Thank you Brandon for stopping by to present such a lovely review.:)
I feel very inspired by your kind gesture.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

You're welcome, zainul. Always good to see you.

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure,Brandon.
Have a nice time. :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this, but not sure in the last line if love is a verb or a noun, but this works well in both ways..

[zainul]

Thank you Leslie for the inspiring review.
Love in the last line is a verb.
Thanks for stopping by to grace the piece.

[redflutterby]

Sweet and positive.. love it!! ;-)

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the inspiring review.
I am very glad that you love it.:)

[Angi]

Zainul, I just tackled my first haiku. Man, was that thing hard! I haven't tried a senryu. I bet they are hard, too. You make it look easy! Nice job. Angi!

[zainul]

Thank you Angi for the lovely words.
When you have the will you have way.
You are a winner with haiku,you will senryu too.
I want to see you as a great winner in these genres.
And thanks for the compliments.
I feel very honored and blessed by your kind words.

[Rhea752]

This is a good senryu, a good comment on human nature. Well done!! Keep writing!! :)

[zainul]

Thank you Rhea for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a lot to me. :)

[Stella Armour]

Lovely little senryu Zainul..

[zainul]

Thank you Stella for the wonderful compliments.
This inspired me immensely,dear friend. :)

[Saumya]

wonderful..!!!

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review. :)

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed..!!! :)

[zainul]

:)

[Saumya]

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[Saumya]

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[Tosca66]

simple words, complex meaning! Great!

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
I feel very honored by your great compliments.:)

[Eileenws]

Very nice and very pithy. You do a good job of getting your point across.

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review :)

[Eileenws]

You're welcome!

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes - life is indeed a blessing. Enjoyed this!

[zainul]

I feel very inspired by your amazing appreciation.
I am very glad that you enjoyed it.