Winner

Winner

A Poem by zainul
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Life can't be valueless

"
Life is a blessing

Its beauty grows forever

Love to see winners

© 2013 zainul


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Very thoughtful poem. Many people never realize how much of a blessing life is, and with or without our awareness its beauty does continue to grow forever. The last line is interesting, considering it includes the titular word "winner". I'm trying to wrap my head around what last message you are trying to convey here. Is it that we are all winners, because we all have the blessing of life? Is it a fragment of "I love to see winners"? Perhaps my favorite play on this last line is: "Love, to see winners." I'd be interested to hear the sentiments of the author!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the wonderful thoughts.
You have nicely expressed my point of view.
Learned r.. read more



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Indeed life is a blessing often we don't see it , it's a miracle really!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Moon for the great review.
This means a world to me.:)
Life is a blessing. Hmm is it true? A thought provoking piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mehak for your approval.:)
This means a world to me.
Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Anytime. :)
INTRODUCTION

1. The title attracted my attention because I was curious as to what your perspective of what being a "Winner" means.

CONTENT

L i f e is a blessing. I agree with you here. I honestly believe that we are here for a purpose whether it be based on f a i t h or r e l i g i o n. B e a u t y is nature; we are apart of this organism.

To be honest, I agree with everything except the last line.

INTERPRETATION

Subjectively, winning does not mean everything. If anything, f a i l u r e is the most productive because it encourages to i m p r o v e. Life is also about confronting death. It is apart of the
balance of opposites.

FOOD FOR THOUGHT

1. This poem reminded me of Transcendentalist poetry which concentrates on nature to focus on lessons for everyday life.

CONCLUSION

Nice work, Zainul! You never cease to impress me!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

It seems that our conversation will never end on this issue.
Tutoring is a great passion.
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Vria P Crow

11 Years Ago

haha I am still reading and learning:D
Conversation ended.
Over and out!
Happy wri.. read more
zainul

11 Years Ago

:D
this is great

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

11 Years Ago

thanks and that reminds me... guess what (what?) I AM GETTING PUBLISHED!
zainul

11 Years Ago

Yea,lovely friend.:)
writingurl14

11 Years Ago

thx
What a beautiful poem! I love the first line especially, "Life is a blessing". I couldn't agree more! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Gabriela for the sweet compliments and admiring review.:)
 ❀ Gabriela ❀

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
What a wonderful senryu, Beauty is, indeed, everywhere around us. Sometimes, we've simply got to stop and take the time to smell the roses, look up into a star-lit sky, sit and listen as raindrops pelt against the rooftops. All we need do is appreciate the splendid sights all 'round us...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Dean,thanks for the wonderful review.
This means a world to me.
Yes, we've simply got to.. read more
Dean Kuch®

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome, my friend. Your poem was as lovely as it was inspiring.
zainul

11 Years Ago

This is a pleasure for us all.
I get the inspiration from great writers of WC. :)
Lovely piece! sticks in your mind, nice! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Johanna for the amazing review.
Your wonderful words stick to my mind too.
Tha.. read more
liked it, and yes life is blessing if its beauty grows :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your affection :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

This is all my pleasure.:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
Lovely haiku, so breezy and easy and happy :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sarah Khalil for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.:)
This mean.. read more
Ah, yes. Life is a game. We have to be the best player we could be. If not, we would miss its beauty and we'll not be that winners.

It's good to see winners...
Nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for defining life in the most straight forward way.
I completely agree w.. read more
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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