Winner

Life can't be valueless

Life is a blessing

Its beauty grows forever

Love to see winners

Reviews

[areawakening]

Very thoughtful poem. Many people never realize how much of a blessing life is, and with or without our awareness its beauty does continue to grow forever. The last line is interesting, considering it includes the titular word "winner". I'm trying to wrap my head around what last message you are trying to convey here. Is it that we are all winners, because we all have the blessing of life? Is it a fragment of "I love to see winners"? Perhaps my favorite play on this last line is: "Love, to see winners." I'd be interested to hear the sentiments of the author!

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful thoughts.
You have nicely expressed my point of view.
Learned reviewers explained it from their point of views.
I think everyone has full right to consider a poem from her/his particular situation.
If the author fully describes his actual background or interpretation,the learned readers might
feel a little hurt.
Thank you Mitchell for the precious contribution.

[Tate Morgan]

May we both make it to the end and feel we have done well by those we took along for the ride

[zainul]

Thanks for giving the surprise gift.
Yes,we may both make it to the end and feel we have done well by those we took along for the ride.
I am very pleased for your graceful stoppage here.:)

[Tate Morgan]

I like your work It is strait forward and it is endearing

[zainul]

I love your work for its picturesque narrative concerning people from all walks of life.

[Tate Morgan]

Well we all are from different places and experiences.While I wax and wain over roads not taken I can see the results of other lives other ways through you and my friends here .

[zainul]

We make a perfect community of writers who represent human lives and activities all across the world.
Hence the collective works of all help us see a holistic picture of humanity.
Thanks for such good thoughts.

[Tate Morgan]

I agree from the mold we were all made in come infinite variations

[zainul]

That's a great conclusion indeed.

[Tate Morgan]

We are surely all the same race or we would not be able to procreate.Hence we are all variations on a common theme

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Lovely! I wish I was able to express myself so adequately in so few words!

[zainul]

Thank you very much for the lovely words and generous compliments.
I am sure that you have the potential to express better than mine.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Karen]

I love Haiku poetry! And this poem is beautiful because indeed life can be a blessing if we see the beauty in it. After all, that's what winners see: the beauty in life and its blessings. Thank you for sharing this poem with us!

[zainul]

Thank you for the amazing thoughtful review.
This means a lot to me.

[Onku Ghosh]

You seem to excel in these three liners.Great job, Zainul. Life is really a blessing for the winners and life is baeytiful.

[zainul]

Thank you Onku for the lovely words.
I am happy to see you win quite frequently.
You never get tired to take challenges.

[Onku Ghosh]

Didn't get you again this tlme.What challenges are you talking about? i dom't understand.

[anxia]

Sure life is a blessing.
But love to hear what you mean by the third line.

[Frieda P]

Much value in your Senryu, nice one zainul.

[zainul]

You have added greater value to boost my morale,dear friend.:)
Thank you for stopping by.

[Hanakuso]

This is beautiful, a blessing that we often take for granted!

[zainul]

Thank you Hanakuso for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Jack V.]

This makes me smile.

[zainul]

Thank you for smiling.:)

[Petra Vlah]

The ones who see life as a blessing are all winners.

[zainul]

Great review indeed.
Thank you Petra for stopping by to grace this piece with admiring review.:)