Mind

Sometimes I find myself unknown to me

Mind reads other minds

Fails to listen its own song

Needs to learn the self

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. First Impression
- Simplicity
- Concise
- Lyrical

BODY

Subjectively, the first line refers to the act of "assumption."
The second line represents the "failure" to understand the "truth" about someone.
The last line is the perfected punchline; the grand finale of "self actualization."

FAVORITE QUOTE

"Fails to listen to its own song."

Honestly, this is my favorite line of the whole poem because it gives it the "lyrical" feel to the poem. It allows the reader to:

1. Connect
2. Appreciate
3. Love

CONCLUSION

Primarily, the "Mind" is a complex organism. However, "human beings" will forever remain "animals" of nature.

FINAL THOUGHTS

You are a wonderful teacher.
You are a beautiful poet.
You are Zainul.

The "Mind" is like a parable for me from the literal and metaphorical standpoint.
Happy writing!

[zainul]

I feel very blessed by your wonderful analysis.
You are a great teacher and leader in systematic review. :)
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D This was my favorite one since it was the first!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :D

[Mary Christabel George]

Ria you have appreciated Zainul Sir's work so well...

[zainul]

Thanks for Ria and Mary.
I feel very glad for the love and compliments of you.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure. :)

[Arabdha]

ah..the road to self discovery !

[zainul]

Thank you for the lovely review.
This has inspired me immensely.

[Tosca66]

Wow, I really like this one, it is so deep in its meaning. It is true, we often can help or see others hurt but hard to see ours.

[zainul]

Thank you Tosca for the inspiring review and wonderful observations. :)
This is a world to me.

[redflutterby]

Very apt. Often we know the minds or thoughts of others but fail to understand our own. Especially if we are focused on others more then ourselves. Very well expressed with so few words. Wonderful poem!!

[zainul]

Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.:)
This means a world to me.

[redflutterby]

You're welcome!! ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[zainul]

Thank you Sami for stopping by and grace the piece with your admiring review.....:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[zainul]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Melissa Hoover]

I get it :D

[zainul]

Thank you Melissa for stopping by and grace this piece with your sweet gesture :D

[Jeff]

You must gain knowledge of self to gain wisdom.

[zainul]

Thanks for the wise word. :)
I have concentrated on this aspect now.

[PP]

No knowledge of self is mere darkness..thanks for sharing Zainul:)

[zainul]

You are very correct to emphasize that no knowledge of self is mere darkness.
Thank you for enlightening me with your admiring review,Prathama :)

[PP]

my pleasure Zainul :)

[zainul]

Mine too,dear friend :)

[PP]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

wonderful!

mind's gist nicely written.

liked it a lot.

[zainul]

Your wonderful review charmed me,dear friend :)
Thanks for stopping by to grace the piece.

[Prritiy]

the pleasure is mine as i get to learn :)

[zainul]

Have a nice time,dear friend :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Rita L. Sev]

We do get caught up in the thoughts of others, so much that we sometimes forget what we feel for ourselves. A good write, pulling the reader back to their own reality.

[zainul]

Thank you Rita for the insightful thought and wonderful review.
Yes,it may be considered as an urge to pull the reader back to their own reality.
I do not insist to be overly selfish,but a reasonable compromise to heed both the self and the rest might be a better option.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.