Mind

Sometimes I find myself unknown to me

Mind reads other minds

Fails to listen its own song

Needs to learn the self

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. First Impression
- Simplicity
- Concise
- Lyrical

BODY

Subjectively, the first line refers to the act of "assumption."
The second line represents the "failure" to understand the "truth" about someone.
The last line is the perfected punchline; the grand finale of "self actualization."

FAVORITE QUOTE

"Fails to listen to its own song."

Honestly, this is my favorite line of the whole poem because it gives it the "lyrical" feel to the poem. It allows the reader to:

1. Connect
2. Appreciate
3. Love

CONCLUSION

Primarily, the "Mind" is a complex organism. However, "human beings" will forever remain "animals" of nature.

FINAL THOUGHTS

You are a wonderful teacher.
You are a beautiful poet.
You are Zainul.

The "Mind" is like a parable for me from the literal and metaphorical standpoint.
Happy writing!

[zainul]

I feel very blessed by your wonderful analysis.
You are a great teacher and leader in systematic review. :)
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D This was my favorite one since it was the first!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :D

[Mary Christabel George]

Ria you have appreciated Zainul Sir's work so well...

[zainul]

Thanks for Ria and Mary.
I feel very glad for the love and compliments of you.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure. :)

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

A positive way to 'mind your own business'.
Excellent Haiku. Succinct, and true.

[zainul]

I am impressed by your wonderful review,John.
You have defined the idea in your special way.read moreI am impressed by your wonderful review,John.
You have defined the idea in your special way.
Thanks for stopping by to grace the piece.

[Devanshu Rajput]

I agree with the previous reviews. Very simple and accessible to all readers. second line is fav.

[zainul]

I am very glad to read your wonderful review.
Thanks for stopping by.:)

[Devanshu Rajput]

It was my pleasure.

[zainul]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Mary Christabel George]

Very true Sir...

[zainul]

Thank you Mary for the generous compliments.
This means a lot to me.

[Mary Christabel George]

You are welcome sir...

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure. :)

[KAin]

Short, insightful, beautiful. Wish I was able to say so much with so few words, sometimes!

[zainul]

Thank you Landred for the admiring review.
You are quite competent in writing poems.
You already proved your worth in other genres.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Another wonderful piece, very insightful! Excellent writing :)

[zainul]

I feel very blessed that you have stopped by to grace this piece with your wonderful review.:)

[Stella Armour]

yes it is important to know yourself first.. a very thought filled senryu....and well penned..

[zainul]

Thank you Stella for the encouraging comment.
I feel very honored by your review.:)

[Stella Armour]

you are welcome Zainul..i always enjoy your work..

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure,Stella.:)

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

I love this, very few words but such poignancy! Let us all be reminded to take time for ourselves, hear the melody within us, find our own rhythm . It is a indispensable "gift" that one needs to lavish their soul upon.

[zainul]

Thank you Tracey for the sweet invitation to take time for ourselves, hear the melody within us, find our own rhythm .The interpretation illuminated the piece to bring the attention of learned members to reevaluate the indispensable "gift".
Thanks for stopping by.

[rubie]

This reminds me of one of my favorite quotes from Shakespeare: "To thine own self be true".

And you have done his words great justice.

So much said with such economical use of words.

Nice write.

[zainul]

Thank you rubie for the admiring review.
I feel very honored for relating this piece with the famous quote of Shakespeare.
This means a world to me.
Thanking for stopping by.

[Renée]

rich one Zainul ! we do need to remember this..

[zainul]

I am very inspired by your wonderful review and nice compliments.
Thanks for stopping by dear friend.:)

[Renée]

( : a pleasure

[zainul]

:)

[Ashley]

It's short, but the words are powerful.
Discovering who you are is a challenge.
You did a great job :)

[zainul]

Thank you Ashley for the admiring review.
This means a world to me.:)