Mind

Sometimes I find myself unknown to me

Mind reads other minds

Fails to listen its own song

Needs to learn the self

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. First Impression
- Simplicity
- Concise
- Lyrical

BODY

Subjectively, the first line refers to the act of "assumption."
The second line represents the "failure" to understand the "truth" about someone.
The last line is the perfected punchline; the grand finale of "self actualization."

FAVORITE QUOTE

"Fails to listen to its own song."

Honestly, this is my favorite line of the whole poem because it gives it the "lyrical" feel to the poem. It allows the reader to:

1. Connect
2. Appreciate
3. Love

CONCLUSION

Primarily, the "Mind" is a complex organism. However, "human beings" will forever remain "animals" of nature.

FINAL THOUGHTS

You are a wonderful teacher.
You are a beautiful poet.
You are Zainul.

The "Mind" is like a parable for me from the literal and metaphorical standpoint.
Happy writing!

[zainul]

I feel very blessed by your wonderful analysis.
You are a great teacher and leader in systematic review. :)
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D This was my favorite one since it was the first!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :D

[Mary Christabel George]

Ria you have appreciated Zainul Sir's work so well...

[zainul]

Thanks for Ria and Mary.
I feel very glad for the love and compliments of you.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure. :)

[Katerina Felinova]

Simplicity at its finest. You have a way with words. Understanding and accepting yourself is key in life but analyzing others is what most do instead...

Needs to learn the self, couldn't say it better myself.

Thank you for sharing.

-Kat

[zainul]

Thank you Katerina for interpreting in such a convincing way.
I am immensely inspired by your admiring review.

[Vile]

This is fantastic, really. I love happening upon random writing and find myself loving it.

[zainul]

Thank you Vile for stopping by to grace this piece.
It means a lot to me.

[Vile]

Of course. :D

[zainul]

I am really very happy to have your strong support,dear poet.:D

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

The prose is enough to tell the whole story... Short and sweet :)

[zainul]

Kanchan,your review is just a piece of gold as your name suggests.
Thank you for stopping by,dear friend.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

My pleasure always :)

[Nancy]

I couldn't agree more with the saying "less is more"...this is a no brainer to some,a thousand pictures to many and a collage of both to me. thanks you for this beautiful piece

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review with a precious analysis and insight of your own.
I am really very delighted to read your wonderful contribution.
Thank you Nancy for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Shirley Wontas]

Such a thought provoking short poem you wrote here, Z..I enjoyed reading it.. :)

[zainul]

I am very happy to read your inspiring review.
This means a world to me,Shirley.

[Sarah Conder]

So simple and yet you're really managed to convey the struggle man has with pleasing others before themselves.

[zainul]

Thank you Sarah for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This is really very inspiring.

[Slevin Kelevra]

Very simple and ornate :) good job!

[zainul]

Thank you Slevin for stopping by to grace this piece.
I am very impressed by the words you have chosen to write the review.

[Betty]

A strong message transmitted with the utter most simplicity... I enjoyed it very much Zainul, thanks for sharing.

[zainul]

Thank you for enjoying the piece.
I am immensely inspired by your admiring review.

[Aethereal]

This poem expresses a deep message. It inspired me to write my own version which you may have as gift:


When our conscious mind
listens to subconscious cues,
the self is revealed.

[zainul]

Amazing priceless gift.:)
Thank you Aethereal for the generous compliments.
I don't have adequate words to reciprocate at this moment.

[Aethereal]

I assumed that this is what you meant, and so this is what your poem inspired me to write.

[Daniel Eckert]

I am in my whole, "I need to find myself" portion of my life so I can relate to this. You are an exceptionally talented poet!

[zainul]

Thank you Daniel for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.