Mind

Sometimes I find myself unknown to me

Mind reads other minds

Fails to listen its own song

Needs to learn the self

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

1. First Impression
- Simplicity
- Concise
- Lyrical

BODY

Subjectively, the first line refers to the act of "assumption."
The second line represents the "failure" to understand the "truth" about someone.
The last line is the perfected punchline; the grand finale of "self actualization."

FAVORITE QUOTE

"Fails to listen to its own song."

Honestly, this is my favorite line of the whole poem because it gives it the "lyrical" feel to the poem. It allows the reader to:

1. Connect
2. Appreciate
3. Love

CONCLUSION

Primarily, the "Mind" is a complex organism. However, "human beings" will forever remain "animals" of nature.

FINAL THOUGHTS

You are a wonderful teacher.
You are a beautiful poet.
You are Zainul.

The "Mind" is like a parable for me from the literal and metaphorical standpoint.
Happy writing!

[zainul]

I feel very blessed by your wonderful analysis.
You are a great teacher and leader in systematic review. :)
Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D This was my favorite one since it was the first!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :D

[Mary Christabel George]

Ria you have appreciated Zainul Sir's work so well...

[zainul]

Thanks for Ria and Mary.
I feel very glad for the love and compliments of you.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure. :)

[Hannah]

There is something to be said about a writer who can manage to say so much with so few words... You truly have a gift... In three lines you were able to pose more questions in the reader's mind than most writers could ever hope to achieve... This piece quickly became one of my favourites :)

[zainul]

Thank you Hannah for picking the piece as one of your favourites.
I am very inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you also for stopping by to grace this piece.

[ferousfinite]

It's a master piece.''''''

[zainul]

Thanks for the great review.

[Katherine]

This is a very true poem, it is short and to the point and really leaves you thinking about what it says once you're finished reading it.

[zainul]

Thanks for the great interpretation of this piece.
I am very pleased that you have stopped by to grace this poem by your admiring review.

[Easterlily]

I-could-not-agree-more...Love-how-you-made-such-a-profound-statement-in-just-a-few-thoughtfully-selected-words....Brilliant...

[zainul]

Thank you Easterlily for the wonderful words of inspiration.
This means a world to me.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[MOON]

Deep write , know thyself so to speak. Wise words.

[zainul]

Thank you Moon for strengthening the point.
I am very glad that you stopped by to grace this piece.

[Lamis]

Wow!! Brief but impressive, expressive and true. Well done!

[zainul]

Thank you for stopping by to grace the piece with your amazing review.:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

So true. So very true. We're busy thinking about what people think rather than giving our own thoughts a thought. Perfect.

[zainul]

Thank you Mehak for emphasizing on the need to giving our own thoughts a thought.
You always inspire me with your great compliments.:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime, friend. :)

[Mizo4]

true the mind does need to understand the person.

[zainul]

Thank you Marion for expressing in such a nice way.:)

[Onku Ghosh]

Brilliant write and made a very interesting read with its inner meaning.......three lines packed with thoughts.You seem to be very good with these three liners.Great,Zainul

[zainul]

Thank you Onku for the inspiring words and generous compliments.:)
Apnader ashirbad amar shobcheye boro patheo.
Valo thakben.

[Goldfrog]

This poem has attracted many interesting reviews. Amazing how you have managed to trigger/elicit/evoke/spur so many currents/streams of thought!

Must be the still, small voice in the whirlwind or, more aptly, the pink lotus atop a still himalayan lake?

[zainul]

I don't know.
There must be some message that they love

I have no words to reciprocate your favor.
Wish a whirlwind of fragrant petals on your face.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.