Ant

Ant

A Poem by zainul
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Upset by the horror caused by ants that plundered into my computer

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Ants are moving inside my computer monitor
I feel helpless where to find an exterminator

What the humans have done to the ant community
Why they come in groups to attack our property
Who is responsible to invite this menace
How can we get rid of such penance

Ants plundered our sugar and bread
They damaged clothing by eating thread
They eat flowers and roots of plants in the garden
They carry away food of pets and human
They bite and inject painful formic acid
I wonder why they have so much greed 

I am totally upset by this tiny vermin
It has conspired to stop my writing

© 2013 zainul


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ants are to be admired for their communal lifestyle and their strength and intelligence. now, that being said..i worked for a major pest control company for 4 years. here is what to do. go out to the feed and seed or dept store and find something called "terro" ant traps. they will find it, feed on it, take the poison back to the queen and that will destroy the whole colony. that is the only way!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the precious information.
I will seek your help to control my ants.
Jessica Gillitzer

11 Years Ago

We always used original grits, not the instant kind. i think it works the same. a friend of mine sug.. read more
zainul

11 Years Ago

I am glad that many good solutions are coming.
All individuals will get the benefit of this us.. read more



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Haha this is ironic (at least to me) seeing that there is an ant on my computer screen right now as I write this! Anyways, as a lover of ants I understand your pain. They sometimes show up in the worst places! I really liked the rhyme and the strait-forwardness of this piece. Great job, I hope you take care of your ant problem soon!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Imara for sharing your experience with ant.I am getting frightened about the fate of my co.. read more
Imara

11 Years Ago

Oh gosh! That's insane! You could probably look something up online that may help. Best of luck!
zainul

11 Years Ago

I am looking and talking for solutions.
It appears that the case is a bit complicated.
H.. read more
That "small but terrible" insects... They are just finding way to live.
Perhaps there's something sweet or something to eat from your monitor. A reminder: Don't eat while using your computer.

But when it comes to your poem here, you are such brilliant to put that sentiment into a cute piece like this. Hope you resolve your problem soon. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Dhaye for the pragmatic suggestions.
I will investigate to find the real cause of in.. read more
Amazing little workers they are and so annoyingly persistent ( :

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

They are showing amazing rivalry against human and their artifacts.
They are annoyingly persis.. read more
Renée

11 Years Ago

( :
yes, what did we do to deserve this revenge?

cute poem..but not a "cute" problem to have.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob for coming to rescue me from the state of helplessness.
I have to look on hour.. read more

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Added on April 19, 2013
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Tags: ant, computer, monitor, exterminator, humans, community, attack, property, invite, menace, responsible, penance, sugar, bread, formic acid, vermin, writing, garden, flowers, pets, greed

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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I am a born writer. But always hesitated to publish. I regret now in vain. more..

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