Poem

Engaged in the process of creation

Sense seems overcast

Restless words race in my brain

Poem will be born

Reviews

[Imara]

Ha a nice quick poem about our feelings of inspiration. Great job. I love that you don't end with a period, it gives it that "To be Continued" feel like you're not done these feelings will never be done. Perhaps I'm reading too much into this. Again excellent job :)

[zainul]

You have a great heart that knows how to make me happy with lovely words:)
Thanks for the inspiration,dear friend.

[Imara]

Oh you're welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Charlene S. Bolton]

I love this! :)

[zainul]

Very nice you, dear friend :)
I am very glad to know that you love this.

[Prritiy]

Wow! exactly what happens when poem pushes her words to us....
loved this :)

[zainul]

You are really feeling the pleasure of witnessing the birth of poems recently.
I hope you will have more poems soon to charm us :)

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Celtic]

what a lovely write here, i really like this one, it's not a poem, it's a creation of words, how you did it...very nice. Depth's flutterin' here from this piece, from these three lines.
i'd like to read more if you continue it...

lovely write.

[zainul]

Thank you, dear friend for the admiring review.
This means a world to me :)

[Stella Armour]

A lovely Senryu Zainul, you have expressed so well in words the start of the thought process that brings life to an idea..clever penning...

[zainul]

Thank you Stella,for the admiring review.
I feel very glad that you have stopped by to grace this piece.

[MOON]

Clever wordplay love the birthing of a poem!

[zainul]

Your admiring review immensely inspired me.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[Greg Skura]

Nice poem! The universe is a wonderful place.....

[zainul]

Thank you Greg for such a thoughtful review :)

[Shelina Shariff-Zia]

Vey clever play on words...short but effective.

[zainul]

Thank you Shelina for the admiring review.
It means a world to me.

[Rhianne Ney]

True, poem will be born out of some restlessness and out of mind thoughts (:

[zainul]

I am very pleased that my theory is getting your support.
Thanks for stopping by,dear friend :)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome, Sir. I should really stop by once in awhile

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure,my true friend :)

[Rhianne Ney]

It's my pleasure also, Sir

[zainul]

:)

[Rhianne Ney]

;D