Poem

Engaged in the process of creation

Sense seems overcast

Restless words race in my brain

Poem will be born

Reviews

[Imara]

Ha a nice quick poem about our feelings of inspiration. Great job. I love that you don't end with a period, it gives it that "To be Continued" feel like you're not done these feelings will never be done. Perhaps I'm reading too much into this. Again excellent job :)

[zainul]

You have a great heart that knows how to make me happy with lovely words:)
Thanks for the inspiration,dear friend.

[Imara]

Oh you're welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Hannah]

You display such skill by choosing only essential words and you have a gift at finding exactly what words they are... The gift of a true writer... Thank you for another poignant piece that is both easy to relate to and to admire :)

[zainul]

Thank you Hannah for finding it and writing the admiring review.
I am blessed with admirers like you in this site.
Really,I don't have appropriate words to reciprocate your wonderful words of compliments.
Have a nice time,dear friend.:)

[Onku Ghosh]

An inspiring poem speaking volumes in just three lines.Every writer knows the restlessness thta ensues before a poem is born................when thoughts come to your head there is such an urgency......Great write, Zainul

[zainul]

Thank you Onku for the thoughtful and admiring review.
I am very glad that you stopped by to grace this piece.

[Angi]

My brain is always racing...words words, everywhere. Interrupting at every turn. Sometimes, I have to get out of bed to write something down so I can rest. This work sums all that up perfectly.

[zainul]

Hi Angi,exactly such restlessness happens to me before the creation of a poem.
Thanks for the wonderful elaboration.
By sharing your true feelings you are inspiring every writer including me.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece. :)

[Angi]

My pleasure!

[zainul]

My pleasure too!

[Acucena G.]

so nice, very quiet ans spectacular , just three lines of huge criativity

[zainul]

Thank you for the very admiring review.
This means a world to me :)

[Acucena G.]

Its my pleasure

[zainul]

:)

[ms. barrie]

zainul, your words, the imagery they evoke in so few lines speaks volumes of the very essence of one feels when their muse awakens them, letting their ink drops from their heart spill onto paper on on a monitor screen. very inspiring and brilliantly penned poem. thank you for sharing! :)

[zainul]

Barrie,I am very glad to read your amazing words.
I feel spell bound by your wonderful contribution that allures me read again and again.
Your compliments and support are always my inspiration and strength:)

[ms. barrie]

zainul... you're very welcome...i feel the same exact way when i read your words...and ditto on everything else. apologizes for my delayed reviews upon your enlightening poems...it's been a rough month and i'm just trying to hold onto the reins. will be sure to rectify that when i find if things are okay in a month or so. take care and pen on, Dear Poet!
Namaste :)

[zainul]

No regret for any any delay.
It happens for me too.
I know your honesty.
Come any time.
I enjoy your lovely words and wonderful works:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Love this short piece, full of inspiration! A poem is indeed born!

[zainul]

Thanks for your lovely review,Rita :)
This means a world to me.

[Kristin Lee]

Simplistic beauty. I like the fresh, crispness of this poem. Funny how creativity is born when sense seems impossible.

[zainul]

Very crisp and invigorating review.
I feel very glad to read your classical comments. :)

[Renée]

like child birth...it is all in the breathing Zainul ( ;

[zainul]

Really,the most painful yet the most happy event of child birth may be compared with the birth of a poem.
Wonderful review :)

[Renée]

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[zainul]

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[J. J. Nightingale]

Exactly ... the storms arrive ..and we must write ..

Creativity is the blessing of a weary heart..

Jazz

[zainul]

Thank you Jazz for stopping by to grace this piece with your wonderful words.
This means a world to me :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

:)........... J.

[zainul]

:).........Z.

[Magnolia]

Great senryu ! I know the feeling :)...Maggie

[zainul]

Thank you Magnolia for the wonderful review :).....Zainul