Guilt

Friends have right to expect warm calls from their friends

Sense of guilt haunts me

Have not said hello for long

Friends expect warm calls

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

The shortnesss of this poem is already on its own epitome. This is one thing to be proud of, Sir Zainul. Great job on using simplicity as strength and creating it as a piece that everyone would never tire to read. (:

I'm sorry for not always stopping by, I just stopped by now since I missed reading your works (:

[zainul]

Dear Rhianne,
I feel very blessed to have such great generous admirer of my work.
Never mind for not being able for stopping by frequently.
I understand that a dedicated poet like you has to perform many assignments.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Rhianne Ney]

(: thanks I'm glad to be of help (:

[zainul]

(:

[Rhianne Ney]

;D

[Emily Feret]

This is very relateable. Simple, but direct. I always love a good Haiku

[zainul]

Thanks for stopping by,Emily to grace this piece with your admiring review.
It means a lot to me.

[Emily Feret]

You are too sweet! Keep up the excellent writing!

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure
Thanks for your lovely gesture :)

[Collins]

You are right
Friends expect warm calls.
Short but full of meanings.
Nice one,my friend

[zainul]

Thank you Collins for strongly supporting my idea.
I am very pleased to read your amazing contribution.

[Collins]

What are friends for?

[zainul]

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

[Collins]

completely true

[zainul]

:)

[Mariam]

short and nice, makes me think...you expressed a lot with a few words

[zainul]

Thank you Mariam for stopping by to grace this piece with your wonderful review.
It means a lot to me.

[Mariam]

:) My pleasure

[zainul]

My pleasure too :)

[Mary Christabel George]

As the technology advances the distance between friends widens.
I hope true friends will always remain true friends.
:)

[zainul]

Thank you Mary for the wonderful comments.
You are very correct to mention that true friends will always remain true friends.
I am very pleased that you made such meaningful comments.

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you Sir.

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)

[Dhaye]

To be free from this feeling, go get your phone and call them even a minute. You can also email them since you are online now. I understand how you feel and great you are to express that in senryu.

[zainul]

Thank you, dear friend.
I will comply with your suggestions soon.
I like to make it clear that the piece was created from my sense of guilt for not being able to review the works of the kind reviewers of WC.I could not return the favor they had done to me.
Thanks for stopping by, dear friend.

[Dhaye]

Ouch...Haha! I am too literal. I thought it's about calling your friends. We have the same problem because I am not regularly visiting my account here. It's only if I have a new idea to put up in writing.
Peace, my friend!

[zainul]

Thanks for the pleasant words.
This means a lot to me.

[Mary]

Wonderful! I have often let too much time pass between friendly calls and visits- beautifly expressed and true.

[zainul]

Thank you Mary for stopping by.
I am impressed by your candid statement that reflects reality.

[DIVYA]

So true sir! But it's never too late. Friends understand and are always there. Beautifully said!

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend.
You have fully grasped the secret behind this piece.
You are really very intelligent.

[DIVYA]

Thanks again sir! A small, beautifully crafted poetry that conveys such warm feelings and concern for friends! It was great to read!

[zainul]

You have a special heart for appreciation.
Thanks a lot,dear friend :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I am glad I have looked at Zainul`s work - this is a warm, true poem, wisdom in three lines

[zainul]

I am very glad and blessed that you have reviewed my piece.
This means a lot to me.

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is lovely and so very true. Reminds me of life before the Internet when your true friends would call or visit. Nicely written.

[zainul]

Thank you Carolann for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
It means a lot to me :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Tate Morgan]

Well as one of your friends I say hello to you as well

[zainul]

Thanks for the favor,Tate :)
You have made my day.

[Tate Morgan]

You have made my night

[zainul]

Really,that's very interesting.
I have written a piece on Rebbeca,your divine consort.
Please have a look.