Thanks

Thanks

A Poem by zainul
"

Inspired by my friend, Debbie Mills.

"
Your fresh cup of love

Gives me new strength and vigor

Thanks for the favor

© 2013 zainul


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I like the word choice of "favor". It really reminded the reader that love is a choice and althought it's not something that comes easily sometimes, it really is a favor and turns out to be a wonderful blessing in the end- to love and be loved by someone in return.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I am impressed by your wonderful contribution.
Yes,love is a choice and love is a favor.
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Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

You're so welcome, and keep up the writing!
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)



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This was great and extremely true. What new love does to us is more than any cup of coffee. It has the effect you described so well here - vigor.

Enjoying your writes. Awesome work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the wonderful review and compliments.
I am very pleased to know that.. read more
I love this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I am very pleased to know that you love it :)
a great thanks giving poem it is:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you again,dear Ganga :)
ganga ramesh

11 Years Ago

:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
loved your poem..got something abrupt and deep (though the combo of abrupt and deep is quite weird, it was all i thought) :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Ganga for the wonderful analysis of this little piece.
It appears that you are quite.. read more
ganga ramesh

11 Years Ago

thank you for welcoming me and welcome for thanking me:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
Beautifully simplistic, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Amy for the admiring review.
This is very sweet and inspiring.
A lovely inspiration your friend gave to you. Your few words will surely give her pleasure for being your friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Susie for the admiring review.
I am very pleased to read your comment for my friend .. read more
Susie Q

11 Years Ago

Keep writing, my friend. I truly enjoy short poems that say so much.
zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very honored,dear friend :)
Very lovely senryu. Odd, the first reading I did, I read the last word as "flavor."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the favor,Michael.
Your inspiration gives me new strength and vigor.
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

Lol! I am pleased you are pleased, my friend.
a volume in a few words. liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by dear friend.
This means a world to me.
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
I like all of the description you fit in so few lines. It makes for some profound imagery! I also enjoyed the colors you used. They seem to be passionate colors, at least to me, and this is a passionate poem. Great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very glad that you stopped by to grace this piece with your lovely words and compliments.I am.. read more
Just Another Writer

11 Years Ago

no problem!
zainul

11 Years Ago

This is all my pleasure :)

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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