A nice little 'association' poem, but I honestly am a little curious as to the point of this. Your writing is technically correct and your definition of a slogan is accurate, but I think the brevity of this piece works against it somewhat and makes the reader question what your motive in writing it actually was, since it's not very forthcoming from the piece.
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A nice little 'association' poem, but I honestly am a little curious as to the point of this. Your writing is technically correct and your definition of a slogan is accurate, but I think the brevity of this piece works against it somewhat and makes the reader question what your motive in writing it actually was, since it's not very forthcoming from the piece.
Yes, that's what a slogan does, and that's why there are so many of them..."Just say no"..."Only you can prevent forest fires"..."You have to be a friend to make one"...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
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