The world is set to change.There are many change
agents around us.They have various names.Think
tanks,reformers,philanthropists,intellectuals,philosophers,writers,politicians
and numerous other names are there to introduce the change
agents.
The change agents have special ways to approach their clients or
target audience.They are good psychologists.They screw into the hearts
of their audience like magic.Nothing stops them to reach their goal.
I went to a place last evening to see a gathering of thousands of
people.They gathered there to get justice.Unfortunately they were
deceived year after year.Their minimum right was not granted.They were
seriously frustrated and the outburst of their agony compelled them to
gather on the square of the road.They felt that,justice delayed meant
justice denied.They chanted slogans ,displayed
banners,posters,festoons and lit candles in favor of their demands.They also performed dramas,sang
songs and presented dances reflecting their demands and aspirations.
The gathering stopped the traffic and it grew like flood drawing
people from all parts of the city.it was really a passionate
gathering.The faces of the people showed unlimited agony and anger.They
were very aggrieved for being denied justice.
My eyes were focused on the lofty stage built for addressing the
audience and performing various events.I saw a number of individuals
there.One anchor was introducing the speakers and the persons known as
change agents took the microphone and spoke to the public in the
audience.He made exceptional gestures.The audience hummed and raised
their eyes.It appeared that the audience was charmed by his wonderful
words.Their eyes beamed with hopes.Their dreams would be fulfilled
soon.They were really hypnotized.I was also hypnotized by the magical
words.I also hoped that his speech would engender something precious.
The climax appeared.The man made a unique gesture and declared that
his latest ghost story book would give instant solutions to their
demands.The myth of the justice was impregnated in the
masterpiece.Everybody must dig into the content to get their dreams
fulfilled.
Most of the audience remained hypnotized.Only few raised their
brows.The orator stopped his historical speech.The anchor announced that
a beautiful female dancer would perform next.The audience welcomed her
with warm applause.
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I really like this. I've never thought of speakers, psychologists, philanthropists, etc. like this but I can see where they could be.
This is a really creative idea. I wish there was more of a plot to go along with this though. You are a creative person and I'm glad that I took the time to read this.
Also thank you for subscribing to my story. It means a lot to me that people are taking the time to read it. If you have any advise for it if you wouldn't mind to just comment and let me know. I'm always open for constructive criticism. After all that's how you improve.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Mary Greenwell for the lovely review.
I am very glad that you have taken time to rea.. read moreThank you Mary Greenwell for the lovely review.
I am very glad that you have taken time to read the story and inspired immensely.
I will read your storries when I have less task around.You might have noted that my major is genre is poem.So.I need more time and attention for story to do justice to its writer.
I am specially impressed by your nice gesture to me.
I hope to reciprocate soon.
It is funny how easily we will call for blood and then with the flicker of movement and the seduction of the eyes the mind is sedated to smiles and applause. Does anyone even think for themselves anymore?
Loved the story!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear friend for your amazing words.
I enjoy the fun that happen too often around us.
add to your list "ghost hawkers! As for me, I prefer the dancer- at least she's selling an entertaining diversion, not false hope. Good write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the great review and nice suggestion.
I am going to comply with your suggestion soo.. read moreThanks for the great review and nice suggestion.
I am going to comply with your suggestion soon.
It saddens me that someone not only with the ability to speak to a large crowd, but captivate them as well, would use such an opportunity to hawk their latest wares. Bring on the dancer!
I liked this. You brought an interesting crowd perspective.
Nice work!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Rogue for the enlightening review.
Such opportunistic persons may be few in number,b.. read moreThank you Rogue for the enlightening review.
Such opportunistic persons may be few in number,but they may be found in all societies.If they can be identified at appropriate time,damage of the interest of the group may be avoided.
I appreciate your use of 'crowd perspective' which is appropriate term for such event.
I really like this. I've never thought of speakers, psychologists, philanthropists, etc. like this but I can see where they could be.
This is a really creative idea. I wish there was more of a plot to go along with this though. You are a creative person and I'm glad that I took the time to read this.
Also thank you for subscribing to my story. It means a lot to me that people are taking the time to read it. If you have any advise for it if you wouldn't mind to just comment and let me know. I'm always open for constructive criticism. After all that's how you improve.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Mary Greenwell for the lovely review.
I am very glad that you have taken time to rea.. read moreThank you Mary Greenwell for the lovely review.
I am very glad that you have taken time to read the story and inspired immensely.
I will read your storries when I have less task around.You might have noted that my major is genre is poem.So.I need more time and attention for story to do justice to its writer.
I am specially impressed by your nice gesture to me.
I hope to reciprocate soon.
Your title 'Change Agents' lured me to read this intriguing write.
"The change agents have special ways to approach their clients or target audience.They are good psychologists.They screw into the hearts of their audience like magic.Nothing stops them to reach their goal"
This paragraph in your story is a great analysis of how people are lulled into a false sense of security by those who say they are going to make their life's better' .... only to infiltrate their minds to gain control for their own deceitful gains.
Great write my friend...
I enjoyed this story very thought provoking read...
You have chosen the best lines.
I am very pleased to appreciate you for explaining the deceit.. read moreYou have chosen the best lines.
I am very pleased to appreciate you for explaining the deceitful nature of the so called change agents.
I am very grateful for your great words.
Thank your for the admiring review.
I read this story with interest. I don't know if the speaker's words were really true, or was he simply an excellent orator. Sometimes people are drawn, against their will, to the wrong thing. I hope this audience found the right thing.
Thank you Marie for your precious time to read and review so nicely.
I have tried to focus on .. read moreThank you Marie for your precious time to read and review so nicely.
I have tried to focus on a particular person who was an excellent orator but who was not actually interested about the well being of the people.He was interested to gain his own interest from the gathering.He simply wanted to promote his business.
But,I tried to mention that some people understood his tricks.People did not rely on the trade mongering individuals only.They monitored the situation closely and evaluated the outcome.They were active to move with their demands from various perspectives.
I also hope with you that this audience found the right thing.
11 Years Ago
I thought that's how it was.
11 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by again.
You have very a caring heart,dear poetess!