Bubble

Bubble

A Poem by zainul
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Lovely kids play bubble blowing

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Bubbles float in air

Dreams dance among lovely kids

Love bubble blowing

© 2013 zainul


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So many good times blowing bubbles in the sunshine and chasing them, trying to catch them without bursting them. Under the rays of the sunshine you can see the colours of the rainbows.....displaying a range of colours that shimmer and change as they float through the air. Such magical memories from when I was a bubble blowing little child.

Thank you for sharing.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very blessed by your wonderful statement.Your colorful experience with bubble blowing in your.. read more
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Your very welcome
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)



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Who doesnt love bubble blowing! I still do it with my nephews and neice. Oh the laughter that bursts when they float around! This is a very nice theme.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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anxia

11 Years Ago

Very much welcome sir :)
This made me smile and reminisce about chasing the bubbles my father would blow around the yard.
A lovely sentiment, my friend. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I can imagine how friendly your father was from your lovely statement.
Thanks for stopping by .. read more
Rogue

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. Thank you for the childhood memories revisited. :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

This is a matter of pleasure for both of us.:)
Although this is very different from my bubble poem, I enjoyed the light and cheerful feeling I got after reading this. It brings back such wonderful memories of my childhood, thank you!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Julie for enjoying the wonderful memories of your childhood.
It is really a pleasure.. read more
I love bubbes:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

That's a great passion indeed:)
Thanks for stopping by to grace this with your lovely review.
Megara

11 Years Ago

anytime:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)
Love minimal style. This a comment on your other work as well. Congers up a moment in time.

Working on that myself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Feelya for stopping by to grace this piece with your comforting words.
I feel very g.. read more
I love all these little poems you write. You really know how to create a meaningful statement using very few words, and that connects very strongly to the connection between heart and mind. It's beautiful :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Leah for stopping by to grace this piece with your thoughtful and admiring review.It means.. read more
Learoxy

11 Years Ago

Thanks for all your constructive reviews. They are greatly appreciated :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

You deserve all these constructive reviews. Thanks for appreciations :)
Lovely imagery here. I can see the kids dancing with the bubbles - great topic for a poem. :). You do a great job with the haiku form, which I think can sometimes be difficult. Good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Anastasia for stopping by to grace this piece with your inspiring words.
I am glad t.. read more
Love the image of bubbles. Your images remind me of childhood. "Dreams dance among lovely kids" very sweet. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely review ad compliments.
I feel very blessed by the wonderful review.
Bubbles! Short but deffinately depicts childhood well and the weightless problems of many children's lifes. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the admiring review.
It means a lot to me.
short and succinct-portrays the joys of childhood !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Arabdha for stopping by to grace this little piece.
I am very happy to learn that it.. read more
Arabdha

11 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on January 25, 2013
Last Updated on January 25, 2013
Tags: bubble, blowing, float, air, dreams, dance, lovely, kids, love

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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