A powerful statement, the shortness of the piece works perfectly; what can one say about something like that, I admire your bravery and tact to do so and with such success. Lets just hope something gets done to stop it ever happening again...But unfortunately I don't hold out much hope..Well done, a moving piece.
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You have adequate reason for not holding out much hope.
But,as a poet we like to dream of a pe.. read moreYou have adequate reason for not holding out much hope.
But,as a poet we like to dream of a peaceful world where all
humans and living entities may live safely.
Thanks for your admiring review and generous compliments.
Terrible incident. Thanks for sharing this one Zainul:)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Prathama for stopping by.
Yes,it is a terrible incident.
Let's pray so that su.. read moreThank you Prathama for stopping by.
Yes,it is a terrible incident.
Let's pray so that such incident never happens again.
to many Zainul...in Afghanistan 10 girls killed by a left over land mine...it is a constant evil rea.. read moreto many Zainul...in Afghanistan 10 girls killed by a left over land mine...it is a constant evil reality made by man...
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This is unfortunate.
When such irresponsible killing will stop?
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I am afraid Zainul... as long as there are human beings this will be...for it seems governments & pe.. read moreI am afraid Zainul... as long as there are human beings this will be...for it seems governments & people put much energy into weapons, than into truly understanding differences & loving one another...
All you and I can do...is change how we react & what we do...and with the grace of God...we will affect change in this small but powerful way...
I had to read this poem twice over before I fully understood it. The line "Savage killed angels" mystified me you referred to the innocent children who died so senselessly.
Thank you Marie for your kind efforts to understand the message of the piece.The description given w.. read moreThank you Marie for your kind efforts to understand the message of the piece.The description given with the title indicates about the tragic killing.Besides,the incident is still a current issue and widely circulated through the media.Use of comfort dogs has been telecast through CNN yesterday.
Thanks for your first contribution for the piece written in the memory of the angel like innocent children of the elementary school.