Passion

This is a real story of a passionate girl

This is an angel with the face of doll
She is an open book glorifying the hall

Her black eyes glitter in strange beauty
I may gaze at them for hours as my duty

She takes care of her old mother
She has no other work to bother


She has a pain deep inside her heart
Her father left the family to live apart

She dropped herself from school for a sacred mission
To look after her mother as token of love and passion

I adore the girl who really writes wonderful poem
I wish for her a handsome groom and happy home

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

I really enjoyed your poem, Zainul...it reminds me of any doting children that would sacrifice their life and time, to help their parent...I know I have, and it wasn't easy...my life is just bittersweet.

Please, forgive my tardiness for not accepting your friendship immediately...I was busy these past months.

[zainul]

Thank you Everett for joining the steam of conversation with your lovely observation and wonderful review.
Please,never mind.
Sharing in this site is our optional work.
So,delay in accepting request for friendship is not considered any deviation.
Thanks for your nice gesture.

[Everett DeValle]

You are so welcome, zainul.

[zainul]

My pleasure :)

[s y e]

Wow, this is really well written. You have captured everything perfectly! Well done! (:

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review and generous compliments (:

[s y e]

You are truly welcome! (-:

[zainul]

(-:

[s y e]

I read this again and it is so touching! Your such a good writer!

[zainul]

You are a magical person.
I feel so drawn to you despite the absence of your picture.
In most cases I can't share with people with obscure identity.
How are you today,sweetie?

[s y e]

Aw, you're so kind.
Aw, well i'm so glad to have you as my friend on here. :)
http://www.wattpad.com/5870913-anna%27s-secret-chapter-1 The Picture on the side of the story is me.
I'm good thank you my dear. How are you? Hope all is well.

[zainul]

I am very glad to see the angel I imagined.
Now,I feel better to share with a wonderful High Land Lass as portrayed by William Wordsworth in his The Solitary Reaper.
Thank you ,thank you Sye!
I have got the lovely sky!

[s y e]

Aw, you are making me blush my dear.
Aweee, your such a sweetheart. I am so honored to be your friend on this site.
Your very welcome my dear! :)
Awwwww, thats sweet.

[zainul]

I am very blessed to feel the blush
You have drowned me in a rosy flush

[s y e]

Awww, your such a cutie!

[zainul]

Awww,you are an awesome beauty!

[s y e]

Awww, why thank you my dear! Your making me blush again. haha. Your such a sweetheart!

[zainul]

ok,no more blush today.
It was outburst of my passion released due to your surprise which I could not imagine at all.
How are you now?

How would you explain the solitary reaper of the poem?

[s y e]

Haha. Did you like the photo?
You are very sweet and kind my dear.
I am good thanks. Just about to go to sleep my friend.

The Solitary Reaper anticipates Keats’s two great meditations on art, the Ode to a Nightingale, in which the speaker steeps himself in the music of a bird in the forest—Wordsworth even compares the reaper to a nightingale—and Ode on a Grecian Urn, in which the speaker is unable to ascertain the stories behind the shapes on an urn. It also anticipates Keats’s Ode to Autumn with the figure of an emblematic girl reaping in the fields.

[zainul]

Yea,I like the photo,very sweet and natural.
I must wish you a very sound sleep as you did with love for the last couple of days.
Your thoughtful analysis of the poem is very enlightening.
We will discuss later when you awake after a sound sleep with wonderful dream.
For now,Good Night,dear sweet friend!

[s y e]

As thank you my dear. I appreciate that.
Aw, thank you for wishing me a good night.
Is it correct? My analysis? Ok, speak soon my friend.
Goodnight my dear. Sweet dreams when you sleep.

[zainul]

You are absolutely correct and enjoyable.
Goodnight!

[s y e]

Good stuff!
Good night sweetheart :)

[zainul]

Good night sweetheart :)

[Deron Alexis]

very well captured well written the rhyme scheme and rhythm ...very well done

[zainul]

Thank you Deron for the very inspiring review and compliments.

[Deron Alexis]

no problem dude

[zainul]

My pleasure

[Kaya]

She sounds like a beautiful and inspiring person.

[zainul]

Yea,she is a beautiful and inspiring person.
Thanks for the lovely review.

[Courtney Johnson]

Beautiful.

That's simply all I can say.

[zainul]

Love your wonderful compliments.
This is a world to me.

[Courtney Johnson]

You're most certainly welcome.

[zainul]

:)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sounds like LOVE to me ... Nice


Jazzy :)

[zainul]

Yea,it is really a token of LOVE to you.
To every woman who cares her mother.
Thanks for the great review and compliments.

[Mary]

you have written a very beautiful tribute to a woman devoted to her mother. Very touching, Sainul.

[zainul]

Thank you Mary for the very inspiring review.
The woman has a very tender heart fully dedicated to her mother.
She and all individuals who care their mothers need to be honored.

[Hannah]

I love how you maintained a rhyme scheme while keeping the poem simple. You describe an angel, but you may not realize that the narrator who is observing her sounds angelic, too.

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review.
I have no suitable words to reciprocate your generous compliments.
Actually,I felt very emotional when I attempted to write this piece for the lively angel.

[AsTheKissIgnites]

i wonder whos the girl is...
she have a very beautiful heart :)

-conie

[zainul]

Yea,she has a very beautiful heart
Thanks for your lovely contribution and inspiring review.

[jwenjwen]

i know who this is about and i love the way you've described her in so little words covering all aspects. salute!

[zainul]

Thanks for the the intelligent gesture and great compliments.
I appreciate your admiring review.

[revalatia]

i can relate to this poem.. i really like it.. sounds exactly like my life actually!

[zainul]

I feel very happy to learn that it sounds exactly like your life.