Passion

This is a real story of a passionate girl

This is an angel with the face of doll
She is an open book glorifying the hall

Her black eyes glitter in strange beauty
I may gaze at them for hours as my duty

She takes care of her old mother
She has no other work to bother


She has a pain deep inside her heart
Her father left the family to live apart

She dropped herself from school for a sacred mission
To look after her mother as token of love and passion

I adore the girl who really writes wonderful poem
I wish for her a handsome groom and happy home

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

I really enjoyed your poem, Zainul...it reminds me of any doting children that would sacrifice their life and time, to help their parent...I know I have, and it wasn't easy...my life is just bittersweet.

Please, forgive my tardiness for not accepting your friendship immediately...I was busy these past months.

[zainul]

Thank you Everett for joining the steam of conversation with your lovely observation and wonderful review.
Please,never mind.
Sharing in this site is our optional work.
So,delay in accepting request for friendship is not considered any deviation.
Thanks for your nice gesture.

[Everett DeValle]

You are so welcome, zainul.

[zainul]

My pleasure :)

[msliebee]

that is very enjoyable and well written

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review.
It means a lot for me.

[Poetic Beauty]

The sentiment is clear and this girls seems really special.

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review.
Yes,the girl is really special.

[Dream Weaver]

There's nothing more passionate then to write about something true
that is near and dear to your heart. Sometimes the best writes are
the ones we face in everyday life. Well done my friend...

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the very inspiring review and compliments.I appreciate your precious comments about the humble piece.

[ms. barrie]

exquisitely penned, enriched with poignant imagery. wonderful write, zainul!

[zainul]

Thank you Barrie for your thoughtful and admiring review.
This is really a world to me.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, zainul, please forgive me for my late reviews upon your lovely writings, sorta dealing with a lot and trying to come up with new stuff. anyhow, as your reviews mean the world to me as well! Happy New Year 13' and Namaste to you, always, my friend :)

[Lily Legrand]

this is so sweet and meaningful. It sounds like you wrote this poem about a girl you know- I enjoyed it a lot!

[zainul]

Thank you for your admiring review.
You are very correct t to say that I wrote this poem about a girl you I know.
I am very glad to know that you enjoyed it.

[PP]

This is a beautiful piece demonstrating passion throughout:)

[zainul]

Thank you Prathama for your inspiring observation :)

[PP]

My pleasure dear Sir :)

[zainul]

My pleasure too,dear Madam :)

[PP]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

That's lovely nice work

[zainul]

Thank you ,Carolann for the admiring review.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Ashly Christen]

beautiful

[zainul]

Thank you Ashly for the lovely review.

[Ashly Christen]

:) welcome

[zainul]

:)

[Anna]

This is beautiful, I think you're a remarkable man, and writer. The comments you leave to others are heart warming, and your reviews are kind and constructive. I love this one especially!

[zainul]

Thank you Anna for the very inspiring review and generous words of compliments.
I think it is a blessing for me to be able to enjoy the precious works of so many talented people contributing in WritersCafe.
Let's enjoy together the creative power of people of all ages and nations.

[Anna]

I love your perspective of everything, I'm actually really interested in you and your mind set- I'd love to know more about you! Did you attend schooling in the US?