The singer stopped singing at the memories of the gruesome murder of his father
The singer burst into tears His voice choked by sad memories and fears The audience got stunned to see this state They knew nothing about the fact or fate
The singer sobbed and sobbed for some time The anchor tried hard to restrain as pantomime He began to express the painful story at length He looked confident and having enough strength
He told,my heart has been filled with grief Please listen to the event in brief Then he told how his father was murdered in his presence He presented a clear account in full sense
He remembered how elegantly his father bade him to run away To save his own life rather than to stay He confessed that he was very selfish He left his beloved father dying in anguish
His lament touched the hearts of all in the audience They all stood and showed deep sense of grievance
wow, this poem is really good. while reading it I can feel the emotions and see what he saw. I like this.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Canicus for your admiring review.
This is a world to me.
I am glad to know tha.. read moreThank you Canicus for your admiring review.
This is a world to me.
I am glad to know that you could feel the emotions and you liked the piece.
From you,Anna and all friends across the world!
Thank you for the wonderful review and complim.. read moreFrom you,Anna and all friends across the world!
Thank you for the wonderful review and compliments.
Wow. All the emotion on this poem was truly amazing. The fact that he good sing his song, feel the emotion and touched the audience, that... Is a real song!
Well done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by again to grace my humble piece with your amazing review.
I appreciate y.. read moreThanks for stopping by again to grace my humble piece with your amazing review.
I appreciate your comment about the real song of the singer.
11 Years Ago
You ate very welcome my dear! :-) Your really talented!!
11 Years Ago
I am very pleased to meet you here.
Comparing your age with mine I would adjudge that you are .. read moreI am very pleased to meet you here.
Comparing your age with mine I would adjudge that you are far far advanced than me in intellect and wit :-)
11 Years Ago
I am very pleased to have met you too :)
I think you are very talented my dear! :)
What a sad and ainful story. But the singer was able to share his grief with an audience which responded in sympathy, and that was a true song.
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you once again for being the first to grace the poem by your admiring review.
Yes,you ha.. read moreThank you once again for being the first to grace the poem by your admiring review.
Yes,you have rightly pointed out that the singer was able to share his grief with an audience which responded in sympathy, and that was a true song.
I adore your generous words.