Moon

A firefly became the moon

She captured a firefly tonight
It looked very cool and bright

The firefly was not happy
It tried hard to be free

It did not want any fight
But,moved left and right

It became successful soon
It flew to the sky to be the moon

Reviews

[Faffy]

This is brilliant! And yet so simple! I'm amazed at your ability to make something so simple into a poem that brings back memories of me and my friends catching fireflies :) but now I feel a bit guilty because u never thought about the fire fly haha well done an amazing read :)

Roshan

[zainul]

Thank you Roshan for the admiring review and lovely compliments.
I enjoy an imaginative world where fireflies dance around us with cool
light allowing us to remember our sportive life in the past.
We can still help the fireflies glow happily by simply keeping their habitat safe.
Let's try to do it from our own places.

[Claire Twinn]

What a lovely idea. Fireflies are too amazing to be held captive.

[zainul]

Thank you Claire for the wonderful review.
I feel glad that you stopped by to grace the piece.

[h d e rushin]

I am an advocate of charm, (I know it's hard to tell) and you have mastered it here.
good work, dana

[zainul]

Hi Dana,
This is a special honor I have received so far for this simple poem.
I adore your charming words that have inspired me so much.
Thank you my dear advocate of charm.
Sincerely,
Zainul

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

What an adorable and captivating read! Thanks for sharing..I will return soon...

Alisa;-)

[zainul]

Thank you Alisa for the lovely review.
I am very glad 6to know that it offered a captivating read.
I will wait eagerly for your return...

Zainul;-)

[Lucas Lima]

I love how this poem just makes me remember my past
thank you for posting ^.^

[zainul]

Thank you,Lucas for the inspiring review.It is my pleasure that this humble poem enabled us to connect and remember our past.
Thanks for stopping by ^.^

[Lucas Lima]

your poems are so wonderful which makes np passing by ^.^

[zainul]

thanks for the generous compliments ^.^

[Lucas Lima]

You are welcome ^.^

[mandy]

ah, brings back memories when i did just that...captured them, marveled at them and then freed them..good write.

[zainul]

I did not imagine that such responses were awaiting this poem with simple thought.I adore your appreciation.
Thanks for the admiring review.

[mandy]

you are welcome....it would please me if you took a glance at some of mine.... :-)

[zainul]

I am going to your area now.
Thanks for the invite.

[Michael G.]

Lovely imagery, kind poet.

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review,dearest poet.

[JiDonnelly]

Beautiful(:
I love the capture and sense of magic in this piece.
Very beautiful indeed.
Full credit.

-JiDonnelly'

[zainul]

I am impressed by your amazing review.
Thanks for the compliments.

[laura]

This is really, good I like it.

[zainul]

Thank you Laura for the lovely review.

[laura]

Your very welcome, it's really good. :)

[zainul]

It is my pleasure.
Thank you very much. :)

[dunnia]

i love the imagination this piece has

[zainul]

Thanks for the great review