Forest calls me again and again. Forest tells me to feel her pain.
Feller cuts trees like slayer. He does not give heed to her prayer. Birds and butterflies flutter in fear. Ferns and flowers shed their tear. All other wildlife cry for life. Cruel feller growls with knife.
Forest calls me day and night. Forest cries to see her plight.
I pretend to be busy over greater task. Nobody knows me under my mask. I give lecture and write against felling, People get charmed by story telling. They give awards for my deed! They chant slogans to inspire my bid!
Poor forest calls me again and again. Her frantic calls die in vain.
I must agree with C.P. below. This really got my attention, because I love and have a great appreciation for nature. We are all energetic beings, even what would seem inanimate. But people have long lost their balance, how to give with one hand and take with another rather than just take with both. Thank you for sharing awareness and prompting mindfulness.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you for the thoughtful observations.
Let's try together to build a strong community of p.. read moreThank you for the thoughtful observations.
Let's try together to build a strong community of proactive people who will not provide lip service only.They will strive to follow our good forefathers to conserve nature in practice too.
I believe that nature is the most beautiful and important creation of our planet, it was here first and without trees and insects and all the varieties of natural things, we wouldn't be. This really connected with me because I am an outdoorsy person and , too, feel the forest's plight. Thank you for writing this.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Elizabeth for the admiring review.
I can understand your heart which loves nature an.. read moreThank you Elizabeth for the admiring review.
I can understand your heart which loves nature and all its elements like forest,insects and all varieties of natural things.
What an inspiring poem, zainul. We all know that deforestation is happening all around us, but so few of us take the time to listen to forest and rebuild. Love that you have brought awareness to this. Excellent work.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Lori for the admiring voice of inspiration.
I am very convinced that the movement fo.. read moreThank you Lori for the admiring voice of inspiration.
I am very convinced that the movement for green environment and forest has many supporters among the writers.
Let's put our best efforts together from our respective locations to save and rebuild forests.
Our concerted efforts will keep this world habitable for us and the future generations.
Wow. This is just pure... truth. It puts the sadness of the demolishing of the forest into words. Well written, and raises awareness. Good work:)
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Emma for the very admiring review.
Your compliments are great inspiration for me.read moreThank you Emma for the very admiring review.
Your compliments are great inspiration for me.
Best wishes,lovely poetess :)
As are yours. Thank you for bestowing upon us these wonderful words. Many thanks.
12 Years Ago
I adore your compliments.
Let our words do more good for keeping the world safe for living for.. read moreI adore your compliments.
Let our words do more good for keeping the world safe for living for us and the future generations.
Cheers!
Oh, man, this is crazy good. Nature so beautiful, sacred, and necessary. But humans don't really get that or don't think it's as important. I've gotta say, you captured that well. I love this(:
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Personne for the very admiring review.
I adore you for the great compliments(:
such beautiful imagery in this poem. i love the concept of the forest calling you for inspiration (i too love trees/nature) - this is a great write, filled with pleasant rhymes and flow. adds to favorites :)
I feel very pleased to read your admiring review.
It means a lot to me.
I love your gre.. read moreI feel very pleased to read your admiring review.
It means a lot to me.
I love your great gesture.