Katy Did and Katy  Didn't

Katy Did and Katy Didn't

A Poem by zainul
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I wish someone opens the knot of "Katy Did and Katy Didn't "

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Katy Did and Katy  Didn't,
Heard the cool song the air brought.

Looked near and looked far,
I could not see any singer.

Checked the green trees,
Checked the lovely flowers.
Checked the soft grasses,
Checked the lofty bowers.

Some angels were around I thought,
To sing,"Katy Did and Katy  Didn't".

Why they sing such strange thing?
Who knows its hidden meaning?

I wish someone comes and opens the knot,
Who sings, "Katy Did and Katy  Didn't".



© 2012 zainul


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Lovely write! Funny and witty at the same time.. Children have these moments don't they - they are suddenly curious about the spectacles you are wearing.. the next moment you give them a toy and they get busy with it... I must say you do have a great insight of poetry! It can be very difficult to write a children's poem! Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Aaran for the admiring review.
I am trying to reach the children.
Thanks also .. read more
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This has a warm aura to it, enjoyed :) xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank for the admiring review.
I am glad that you enjoyed it :) xo
interesting and honestly I can say its not like anything I've ever read. This concept is uniquely your own and I envy that :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the loving words and wonderful review.
Please accept the piece as your own,
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Lovely write! Funny and witty at the same time.. Children have these moments don't they - they are suddenly curious about the spectacles you are wearing.. the next moment you give them a toy and they get busy with it... I must say you do have a great insight of poetry! It can be very difficult to write a children's poem! Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Aaran for the admiring review.
I am trying to reach the children.
Thanks also .. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
The slightly risque Hoagy Carmichael song Katy Did and Katy Didn't is, as suggested, a strange thing to hear given the innocent child-like setting suggested by 'lovely flowers' and 'soft grasses' (a really delightful stanza). There may be a suggestion of cultural invasion, popular Hollywood fare being played on the radio in your home country. Someone who hears this song for the first time might be presented with a big cultural knot to unravel.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you John for the wonderful suggestion.
I would not know that such famous songs existed i.. read more
Marie

12 Years Ago

I love Hoagy Carmichael, and I love the poem.
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Marie for the nice comments.

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Added on September 29, 2012
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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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