Katy Did and Katy Didn't

I wish someone opens the knot of "Katy Did and Katy Didn't "

Katy Did and Katy  Didn't,
Heard the cool song the air brought.

Looked near and looked far,
I could not see any singer.

Checked the green trees,
Checked the lovely flowers.
Checked the soft grasses,
Checked the lofty bowers.

Some angels were around I thought,
To sing,"Katy Did and Katy  Didn't".

Why they sing such strange thing?
Who knows its hidden meaning?

I wish someone comes and opens the knot,
Who sings, "Katy Did and Katy  Didn't".

Reviews

[Pratik]

Lovely write! Funny and witty at the same time.. Children have these moments don't they - they are suddenly curious about the spectacles you are wearing.. the next moment you give them a toy and they get busy with it... I must say you do have a great insight of poetry! It can be very difficult to write a children's poem! Nice write.

[zainul]

Thank you Aaran for the admiring review.
I am trying to reach the children.
Thanks also for the nice compliments.

[Jordan]

Child like in its expression and just full of simplicity. Some of the greatest writings were full of passion or full of childishness, and this is a masterful piece of innocence that is in childhood. Wonderful writing!!

[Rogue]

Zainul, this is lovely. So full of childhood curiosity and impishness. :)

A wonderful read. :)

[zainul]

Hi Rogue,I am very glad that you have stopped by to grace this piece.
The thought of childhood curiosity and impishness gives innocent pleasure.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a whimsical slice of nature you have captured here! Child-friendly, with great flow - it could be set to a schoolyard chant! Enjoyed this piece a lot!

[zainul]

Rita,I feel very honored by your admiring review and generous compliments.
A famous teacher like you can identify which content should be set to a schoolyard chant.I express my pleasure that you have chosen this piece as a meaningful one and enjoyed it.

[TL Boehm]

I liked the cadence of this and it reminded me of summers as a child when I used to go hunting katydids. Always catch and release. They fascinated me. Not sure why.

[zainul]

I am very glad to note the spontaneous account of your lovely childhood.
I can imagine how you went hunting,catching and releasing the wonderful
green katydids back in nature.
Your memories of all these activities have fascination me too and I am sure
many writers in this site will feel nostalgic as well.
Thanks to the lovely katydids that imbibed our lives with happiness.
Thanks for stopping by and grace this piece with your passionate note.

[Veronica Chandler]

This is a sweetly written piece, full of curiosity, sunshine, light and warmheartedness. Such a lovely little piece.

[zainul]

I feel very blessed Veronica to read your amazing review.
This means a world to me.
Thank you very much for stopping by.

[Veronica Chandler]

It is my pleasure Zainul.

[zainul]

Mine too :)
Thanks again,dear friend :)

[Reeti]

From what i construe, the morale is that we do or do not do things in life. In our own separate journeys, we all are explorers who muse over what we are missing out in life or over what will happen in the distant future. This perception is also very strongly felt by me. I am glad to read this verse as it delves on its mystery. It has a really sweet rhythm to it.

[zainul]

Hi Reeti,
Your review sounds like a spiritual note.
It has made my heart cool.
I have found a new inspiration to look at the nature and to myself.
Thank you for stopping by to grace this humble piece with your admiring review.
Sincerely,
Zainul

[Renée]

Katy dids...is this about insects? oh they do make a racket don't they ? Cute write ! ( :

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely review.
Yes,it is about insects.
Yea,they do make racket.
Thanks for your compliments.

[Renée]

Very cute ! I do love katydids & their delightful racket it was my pleasure to read ( :

[zainul]

This is really a great pleasure indeed!
Love your amazing gesture (:

[N.Sevilla]

I have no idea why, but I really enjoyed it! Perhaps the flow of words that reminds me of a child's rhyme.

[zainul]

Thank you for enjoying the piece.
I am very pleased to learn that it reminded you of a child's rhyme.

[rabbit]

Took me a minute to get but haha I get it.

[zainul]

Thank you Rabbit for the favor.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Interesting:)

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely gesture:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

You're welcome, and in reaching the children I believe you will succede:)

[zainul]

Thanks for your good wises.
I feel blessed by your lovely words.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thank you so very much:) I've never been told that before:) And you're welcome:)

[zainul]

You are really lovely poetess.
I like to read and review your writes one by one.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Well thank you:) I'm glad someone likes my work. I write these things for myself, but it's always amazing to find that someone else understands them and enjoys them. Again thank you:)

[zainul]

:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

:)