Farm Girl

Inspired by a photograph of a friend

She is happy with her work in the fruit garden.
Her smile wins the hearts of all gentlemen.

She works all day now and again.
She likes dry day without rain.

  She is a farm girl who lives on the plain.
Her smile will bring you joy and beat your pain.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

very endearing and an enjoyable read, very descriptive of the character's love and loyalty towards gardening, the earth also of her basic character, one that self-sacrifices for the sake of other's, one who is tender heart-ed. very reminiscent of once again nursery rhyme perhaps farmers would tell their children about the importance of giving back to the earth, growing your own food. almost reads like a sonnet. a lovely write. thanks for sharing :)

[zainul]

Thank you Barrie for the lovely review.
You have contemplated many dimensions of this little work.
I adore your great contribution :)

[ms. barrie]

you are very welcome, as i adore your wonderful contribution as well. it is a lovely poem, very sweet, yet very insightful!

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely compliments.

[ms. barrie]

you welcome, thank you for sharing :)

[Belle]

I remember William Wordsworth words :
"People who work and live in the urban has a pure communion with nature."
and I do agree! I am not against with the rustic life in the city, but as we tend catching up with what we believe a perfect life in a developed society the magic of nature dies...Thank you Zainul for sharing this. I think the image you painted in here is a reminder of a simple and happy life in a perfect world!

[zainul]

Thank you Bell for reviewing with great words of William Wordsworth.
I am very happy to note that you have termed my endeavor as a very meaningful one in the context of the present day world.

[Belle]

Your poetry deals with reality and in many aspect I can relate for I think we are sharing common perspective over present situations... :)
I will be reading and anticipating for more from you!

[zainul]

Thank you Belle for the trust on me.
I love your poems,passions and pragmatic views.
Yes, we are sharing common perspective over present situations... :)

[Marie]

And I'm sure she's not only happy but beautiful.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for revealing the truth.
I am very shy and hesitant to mention that!

[Marie]

I could tell by the away you wrote it.

[zainul]

Please tell it so that I may be released from the mysterious burden.

[Marie]

Her smile wins hearts, and that makes her sound beautiful

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sounds like Love .. Nice thoughts my friend ...

Jazz :)

[zainul]

Thank you,Jasmine for the wonderful review.
Your nice words inspire me immensely.

[J. J. Nightingale]

:) .............

[quinfinn]

sweet and concise and says all...very nice

[zainul]

Thank you for the very admiring review.
I appreciate your kind words.

[quinfinn]

denada

[Coyote Poetry]

People who know hard work and don't complain. Usually don't know hunger or sadness. I like the people who work on farms. Work hard all days and appreciate life. Your poem create a good vision. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[zainul]

I feel exulted that you wrote review on this humble work.
Thank you very much,great poet.