So simple but very meaningful. Very touching for the working class
Posted 12 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I am very sorry Kayti to be so late in responding to your lovely review.
I missed the contribu.. read moreI am very sorry Kayti to be so late in responding to your lovely review.
I missed the contribution for unknown reason.
Thanks for the amazing review and precious comment.
Hi Tate,
I am sorry I am responding so late.
I can't figure out why it could not be noti.. read moreHi Tate,
I am sorry I am responding so late.
I can't figure out why it could not be noticed.
Thanks for the great contribution and wonderful review.
Best,
Zainul
Probably it is because he has already more than enough to feed the family, or simply because he is a businessman and or salesperson and happiness obtained when stocks are sold out! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Belle for your great review.
In this case,the little boy had little stock for sale... read moreThank you Belle for your great review.
In this case,the little boy had little stock for sale.
The poor boy runs his family from its profit.
He often fails to sell his stock and thus fails to earn enough for his family.
So,when he could finish his stock of popcorn,he had earned the desired profit and thus he became happy.
Have you got my point,dear friend?
12 Years Ago
Meaning this is a depiction of life in poverty.
Livelihood of the family depends upon the sale.. read moreMeaning this is a depiction of life in poverty.
Livelihood of the family depends upon the sales of the day.
I hope I get it this time...
12 Years Ago
I will post a poem also that I wrote months ago.
Hope you can check it also, my piece and thi.. read moreI will post a poem also that I wrote months ago.
Hope you can check it also, my piece and this one
share the same theme : subsistence.
12 Years Ago
Yes,you have explained the matter better than me.
Thank you very much.
There are lots of.. read moreYes,you have explained the matter better than me.
Thank you very much.
There are lots of people whose families depend upon the sales of the day.
12 Years Ago
I was thinking of reviewing your poem now.
Thanks for suggesting me a piece.
12 Years Ago
I can imagine how hard it is to be in a unsafe net...My country is also crowded with such this situa.. read moreI can imagine how hard it is to be in a unsafe net...My country is also crowded with such this situation, but still they manage to survive with a smile in the face in between and at the end of a sunhammered day!
12 Years Ago
Thank you for looking at their plight so intimately.
They are not aliens
They are our n.. read moreThank you for looking at their plight so intimately.
They are not aliens
They are our neighbors,may be they are our relatives.
Many factors may influence people to become poor.
12 Years Ago
Yes, definitely not an aliens, but an admirable human being trying so hard to live in harmony and wi.. read moreYes, definitely not an aliens, but an admirable human being trying so hard to live in harmony and with dignity amidst poverty. They really learn to live without depending from anyone specially from the government. And the best part of it is they rarely complain...
12 Years Ago
I posted the piece and the title is Philippine Jasmine. :)
Thank you.
I have read and reviewed it.
Please have a look.
12 Years Ago
Thank You Zainul. Your poor little boy sells popcorn while our poor little boys and girls sell garla.. read moreThank You Zainul. Your poor little boy sells popcorn while our poor little boys and girls sell garland of flowers. :)
12 Years Ago
That's right.
They are around us everywhere trying to live honestly at their minor age when th.. read moreThat's right.
They are around us everywhere trying to live honestly at their minor age when they are supposed to go to school and play with children of their age.
Let's hope and pray that they can always smile.
LOL, I truly loved the meaning behind this, and it's an lovely senryu poet!
You always make me smile. It has some release wisdom in it...
E.L.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Elisa for the amazing review.
I am glad that you liked it.
12 Years Ago
Yes, I loved it! it shows a moral, and great observation, on daily basis, with daily people, who are.. read moreYes, I loved it! it shows a moral, and great observation, on daily basis, with daily people, who are forgotten, but not by you ;)
12 Years Ago
You are also very compassionate, dear friend.
We all are the passengers of the same boat!
You're welcome, it does not mean I'm heartless... I just have my own religion, "love" and "science" .. read moreYou're welcome, it does not mean I'm heartless... I just have my own religion, "love" and "science" and "freedom" so I saw myself in the lifeboat, more like that :)
Lovely senyru. Sales do bring smiles to a vendors face.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Marie for the wonderful review.
All sales personnel have the same smile like the li.. read moreThank you Marie for the wonderful review.
All sales personnel have the same smile like the little boy when they can sell.
I guess we do smile, when what we do is appreciated, and wanted .. whether it be popcorn , poetry or pudding .. If we like where we are , and can live with what we do, then we r a success .. and happy ..
I like your thoughts .. Jazz
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Jasmine for generalizing the matter with 3 Ps.
It is a unique review.
Thanks y.. read moreThank you Jasmine for generalizing the matter with 3 Ps.
It is a unique review.
Thanks you dear friend.
you mean you're out of popcorn? and i was getting hungry! nicely written
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12 Years Ago
Really,its flavor made me hungry too.
I could buy a packet from the boy.
Please wait a b.. read moreReally,its flavor made me hungry too.
I could buy a packet from the boy.
Please wait a bit.
I will bring one for you.
Thanks for the lovely review.