Collusion

Collusion of leaders and vandals has emerged as a serious social malady

Vandals make fortune

Scandals involve top people

Collusion harms trust

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Ten words and a multitude of meaning - brilliant! Each phrase is the basis of something gigantic, something obnoxious, so, you've set thoughts running, sent this reader off and away to mull over each segment - or, as you put it: each social malady. The second and third lines echo something i recently posted.

Thank you for sharing this cleverly written poem .. it's memorable.

[zainul]

I feel very fortunate today to have two wonderful reviews.
The interpretation you made here is awesome.
I will read your recent posts and enjoy their contents.
Thanks for the amazing review.

[quinfinn]

precisely the problem with the economy.......and worse things

great write!

[zainul]

Thank you for the very illuminating review.

[quinfinn]

yes!

[Tate Morgan]

Dont we know it.It seems mans nature to advantage himself at anothers distress.

[zainul]

Thanks,Tate for the great review.

[Shane Blackheart]

This poem may be short, but it definitely holds much truth! Excellent.

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review.

[Rene Velez]

brief and effective, poignant indeed.

[zainul]

Thank you for the great review,Rene.

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a good poem... I love the shortness of it ;D

[zainul]

Thanks for your inspiring review,Rhianne.

[Rhianne Ney]

Your welcome... I only realized now that it was a haiku love it all along

[zainul]

Very nice of you,talented poetess.

[Rhianne Ney]

;D

[Alexandria Reece]

The script of our past, present and future. Each verse is this way and follows this list I feel line-by-line in a way that perhaps was a subconscious thought or maybe left to the reader's mind to digest individually. Here's what I'm saying I see with the past, present, future idea..

Past: Vandals (in the original sense) best known for being one of the tribes to sack Rome in 455 AD. Those throughout history who have modeled their actions and earned the title ring true here too. "Vandals make fortune"

Present: the scandals line is about the current issue you are addressing (brilliantly so, might I add) "Scandals involve top people"

Future: the harm of trust, the outcome of the current scandalous events... "Collusion harms trust"

You wrote a great poem and maybe didn't even know how much flow and amazing structure it had to it in strange lights! Brilliant for surface value and any any depth that can be gained by the reader and encouraged for exploration by the writer as a format. I'd go on to dissect how each line is a microcosm of this to me, but I run the risk of sounding like I'm lecturing at University. AMAZING WORK in every way, as always!

If I've picked up on an ounce of your depth in these short words it has been an honour.

[zainul]

Alexandria,I bow my head for such vivid and meaningful explanation through your wonderful review.read moreAlexandria,I bow my head for such vivid and meaningful explanation through your wonderful review.
It has illuminated and empowered me to write for the benefit of humanity.
Thanks for the best award I have received for my endeavor in literature.

[Alexandria Reece]

-bows my head in return-

Thank you for creating a beautiful format for thought and another piece of wonderful art.

[zainul]

I am very grateful for your generosity.
Thank you very much.

[Helen Crutchett]

Wonderfully penned. Had a wonderful distinct flow about it. Good job!

[zainul]

Thanks for the amazing review.
Your words inspired me immensely.

[Valentine]

Very true and you expressed it very well..God bless..Kathie

[zainul]

Thank you Kathie for your great inspiration.
God bless.
Zainul

[Marie]

Very good Tanka. Vandals and scandals are destroying the government meant to serve its people.

[zainul]

Thank you for the wonderful review,Marie.