Wanton

Decent people resist wanton

Wanton provokes all

Employs organs to seduce

Chaste person exults

Reviews

[Personne]

At first I didn't know what wanton was, so I searched it up. Now that I know, I can see that this poem is very wise! Great write, like always(:

[zainul]

I feel very blessed to learn that you found a new word and a useful message in this piece.
I adore your wonderful review,Personne.

[ms. barrie]

a very lovely haiku
one that filled with the uniqueness beauty of your words
and very insightful. thanks for sharing :)

[zainul]

Thank you Barrie.
I adore your lovely review.

[ms. barrie]

you welcome, it was a pleasure to read :)

[Rhianne Ney]

A great Haiku and well creative
;D

[zainul]

Rhianne,I am very sorry for failing to read your review for long.
Thanks for the very inspiring review ;D

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome ^-^

[Morning Star (SJA)]

Very interesting poem. You write very well.

[zainul]

Your admiring review gives me strength to pursue with more enthusiasm.
Added your Facebook and twitter.
Favorited some in twitter.

[Helen Crutchett]

Very interesting write zainul. I am just enjoying this without becoming too bogged down with rheteric. It works well in my opinion. Good job!

[zainul]

Thank your Helena for the awesome review.
I am glad that it works well in your opinion.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

such good poetry my friend ^_^
100/100

[zainul]

You have inspired me immensely.
Thanks for the great review ^_^

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Certainly can understand something.....nice work :)

[zainul]

Thank you,Balkaran for the admiring review :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

A little raw, and short .. too many missing descriptions to be understood fully ..

Jazz

[zainul]

Yes,a little effort is needed to understand fully.
However,if you consider "wanton" versus "chaste person" things may be clear soon.
Thanks for your admiring review.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Employs organs to seduce ? Like uses their flesh to seduce ? A clean person feels joy ? ..

[zainul]

Yes ,you have almost got it.
A wanton always tries to seduce with her various organs.
But the chaste or pure ones are not tempted by her tricks or lures.
The chaste person finally rejoice.
It indicates the victory of decent or modest over immoral ones.
Thank you very much.

[Marie]

Okay; forget the comma. It makes sense as it is.

[zainul]

Thank you both for your favor.
Since there is some obscurity,I like to cite just one case so people get into idea.
I assure that enigma or puzzle will be avoided in my work as best as possible.
You can relate it with the case of Monica Lewinsky.
I think it will open the door for a fair discussion.

[J. J. Nightingale]

The two concerned in that discussion are both "wanton" .. So maybe you are just writing about the WOMAN ? ... Hummmm

[zainul]

You already said, "too many missing descriptions to be understood fully".
Thanks for your precious time for analyzing.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Ok ... :)

[zainul]

Thanks a lot ... :)

[Marie]

Possibly we should move on. However I would say that enigmas are good and thought-provoking, adding interest to a poem or story.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sometimes .. If a poem is heavily "veiled" some will never be able to understand .. I think simple is best .. :)

[Marie]

I do "simple". But that doesn't challenge people.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I love you work Marie .. it is always beautiful .. "Good Night" ... :)

[Marie]

I don't know why this seems funny to me, but it does...I don't know if that's how you meant it to be taken...

[J. J. Nightingale]

I am also not getting this Marie .. not sue of the point .. hummmm

[Marie]

Put a comma between "chaste person" and "exults".

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for review.
Chaste is used here as adjective.

[Marie]

Jasmine, does this help?

[quinfinn]

this is, in itself, provoking...but has an excellent message and is well written. i believe that chastity is all in the mind, whereas lust...well, that's purely physical

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review.
We can learn various aspects of sensuality from this conversation.

[quinfinn]

my pleasure!

[zainul]

Mine too!