Wanton

Wanton

A Poem by zainul
"

Decent people resist wanton

"
Wanton provokes all

Employs organs to seduce

Chaste person exults

© 2012 zainul


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At first I didn't know what wanton was, so I searched it up. Now that I know, I can see that this poem is very wise! Great write, like always(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

I feel very blessed to learn that you found a new word and a useful message in this piece.
I a.. read more
a very lovely haiku
one that filled with the uniqueness beauty of your words
and very insightful. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Barrie.
I adore your lovely review.
ms. barrie

12 Years Ago

you welcome, it was a pleasure to read :)
A great Haiku and well creative
;D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Rhianne,I am very sorry for failing to read your review for long.
Thanks for the very inspiri.. read more
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

You're welcome ^-^
Very interesting poem. You write very well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Your admiring review gives me strength to pursue with more enthusiasm.
Added your Facebook and.. read more
Very interesting write zainul. I am just enjoying this without becoming too bogged down with rheteric. It works well in my opinion. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank your Helena for the awesome review.
I am glad that it works well in your opinion.
such good poetry my friend ^_^
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

You have inspired me immensely.
Thanks for the great review ^_^
Certainly can understand something.....nice work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you,Balkaran for the admiring review :)
A little raw, and short .. too many missing descriptions to be understood fully ..

Jazz

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. J.  Nightingale

12 Years Ago

Sometimes .. If a poem is heavily "veiled" some will never be able to understand .. I think simple i.. read more
Marie

12 Years Ago

I do "simple". But that doesn't challenge people.
J. J.  Nightingale

12 Years Ago

I love you work Marie .. it is always beautiful .. "Good Night" ... :)
I don't know why this seems funny to me, but it does...I don't know if that's how you meant it to be taken...


Posted 12 Years Ago


zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Marie for review.
Chaste is used here as adjective.
Marie

12 Years Ago

Jasmine, does this help?
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this is, in itself, provoking...but has an excellent message and is well written. i believe that chastity is all in the mind, whereas lust...well, that's purely physical

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the admiring review.
We can learn various aspects of sensuality from this conversat.. read more
quinfinn

12 Years Ago

my pleasure!
zainul

12 Years Ago

Mine too!

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Added on September 5, 2012
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zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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