At first I didn't know what wanton was, so I searched it up. Now that I know, I can see that this poem is very wise! Great write, like always(:
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I feel very blessed to learn that you found a new word and a useful message in this piece.
I a.. read moreI feel very blessed to learn that you found a new word and a useful message in this piece.
I adore your wonderful review,Personne.
Rhianne,I am very sorry for failing to read your review for long.
Thanks for the very inspiri.. read moreRhianne,I am very sorry for failing to read your review for long.
Thanks for the very inspiring review ;D
Your admiring review gives me strength to pursue with more enthusiasm.
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A little raw, and short .. too many missing descriptions to be understood fully ..
Jazz
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Yes,a little effort is needed to understand fully.
However,if you consider "wanton" versus ".. read moreYes,a little effort is needed to understand fully.
However,if you consider "wanton" versus "chaste person" things may be clear soon.
Thanks for your admiring review.
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Employs organs to seduce ? Like uses their flesh to seduce ? A clean person feels joy ? ..
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Yes ,you have almost got it.
A wanton always tries to seduce with her various organs.
Bu.. read moreYes ,you have almost got it.
A wanton always tries to seduce with her various organs.
But the chaste or pure ones are not tempted by her tricks or lures.
The chaste person finally rejoice.
It indicates the victory of decent or modest over immoral ones.
Thank you very much.
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Okay; forget the comma. It makes sense as it is.
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Thank you both for your favor.
Since there is some obscurity,I like to cite just one case so p.. read moreThank you both for your favor.
Since there is some obscurity,I like to cite just one case so people get into idea.
I assure that enigma or puzzle will be avoided in my work as best as possible.
You can relate it with the case of Monica Lewinsky.
I think it will open the door for a fair discussion.
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The two concerned in that discussion are both "wanton" .. So maybe you are just writing about the .. read moreThe two concerned in that discussion are both "wanton" .. So maybe you are just writing about the WOMAN ? ... Hummmm
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You already said, "too many missing descriptions to be understood fully".
Thanks for your prec.. read moreYou already said, "too many missing descriptions to be understood fully".
Thanks for your precious time for analyzing.
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Ok ... :)
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Thanks a lot ... :)
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Possibly we should move on. However I would say that enigmas are good and thought-provoking, adding .. read morePossibly we should move on. However I would say that enigmas are good and thought-provoking, adding interest to a poem or story.
Sometimes .. If a poem is heavily "veiled" some will never be able to understand .. I think simple i.. read moreSometimes .. If a poem is heavily "veiled" some will never be able to understand .. I think simple is best .. :)
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I do "simple". But that doesn't challenge people.
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I love you work Marie .. it is always beautiful .. "Good Night" ... :)
this is, in itself, provoking...but has an excellent message and is well written. i believe that chastity is all in the mind, whereas lust...well, that's purely physical
Thanks for the admiring review.
We can learn various aspects of sensuality from this conversat.. read moreThanks for the admiring review.
We can learn various aspects of sensuality from this conversation.