Missed Call

Missed Call

A Poem by zainul
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Innocent girls are robbed of their treasures by cheaters using mobile phones

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The story started with a missed call.
The mobile phone showed a number,
Which the girl could not remember at all.
She thought for hours and fell in slumber.

After a sound sleep she dialed the caller.
A male voice replied from the other end.
She asked him why he called her,
The man said he wanted to make her friend.

Then the story took a different turn.
New hope was born in the mind of the virgin.
She loved the man and started to yearn
For marriage and  eloped beyond the known margin.

Soon a new story floated in the air,
The girl was cheated and wandered everywhere.






© 2012 zainul


Author's Note

zainul
Based on a true story where the victim was a virgin

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I fear technology for both my son and my daughter! Great write and reminder!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

You are a great mom indeed.
But,how do you feel your son and daughter will grow up as a useful.. read more
EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Double edge sword...... but so far they both have shown good judgement and I have to say I am lucky .. read more
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the care you are giving them.
Moms are like mother birds who fight to the last to p.. read more
It's even more "sad" because it's the truth. Thanks for sharing~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the sympathy for the girl.
Thanks for the admiring review.
This is so sad, and it does make a story. It is so important to be careful, not only with the Internet but with mobile phones. As technology grows so does danger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

There are cheats,rogues,rapists among men and prostitutes,s***s,w***e among women who take advantag.. read more
Marie

12 Years Ago

You are welcome. I did not know the mobile phone was used that way; I thought danger came only from .. read more
zainul

12 Years Ago

Marie,we are considered fool by so called smart people around us.
They can do all nasty work f.. read more
nice one "z" I wanted to read more.......make the poem longer :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks a lot,John.
I wanted to confine it as a sonnet in 14 lines.
Please imagine a stor.. read more
Sad dear friend:( But portrayed well, and draws out the emotion of sorrow for the girl. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing.
Yea,I agree that everyone deals differently with any situation, but the st.. read more
Priscilla Sayers

12 Years Ago

:)
zainul

12 Years Ago

:)
Hi Zainul,
A poignant and cautionary tale of behaviour that invades the new world of the internet and satalite communications. Well portrayed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Yes,I agree with you.
Thank you,John for your convincing arguments.
John Alexander McFadyen

12 Years Ago

I am humbled dear friend.
zainul

12 Years Ago

I feel very relaxed when I share with you.
Your poetical philosophy give me strength and conf.. read more
aww.. how sad.. it reflects that , Men should respect women and not like this :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Kuhr for the admiring review .The victim requires sympathy and support.The cheaters and t.. read more

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Added on September 2, 2012
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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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