Missed Call

Missed Call

A Poem by zainul
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Innocent girls are robbed of their treasures by cheaters using mobile phones

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The story started with a missed call.
The mobile phone showed a number,
Which the girl could not remember at all.
She thought for hours and fell in slumber.

After a sound sleep she dialed the caller.
A male voice replied from the other end.
She asked him why he called her,
The man said he wanted to make her friend.

Then the story took a different turn.
New hope was born in the mind of the virgin.
She loved the man and started to yearn
For marriage and  eloped beyond the known margin.

Soon a new story floated in the air,
The girl was cheated and wandered everywhere.






© 2012 zainul


Author's Note

zainul
Based on a true story where the victim was a virgin

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Here is another example where virgins have been molested by the so called teachers:

http://usnews.nbcnews.com/_news/2012/10/05/14235370-prosecutors-nj-teachers-had-sexual-relations-with-students-colleagues-covered-it-up

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so tragic yet beautifully worded. It definitely made me think. Fantastic write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Kayli for your admiring review.
Yes,this is a case of concern.
We have to thin.. read more
Sadly we see this alot in the west Fewer in the east.But men are predatory.I saw a girl witrh a little child sitting on the side of the road the other day

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Tate for your compassionate feeling.Yes,in most cases men are predatory.However,such incid.. read more
Sent chills down my spin..exploitation of women no matter the individuals age ( be it virgin bodies or mind) is to be abhorred. Thank you for writing about it with such insight

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the abhorrence against the exploitation of women.
This will help them to be carefu.. read more
Tragically beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Oh,your review touched the core of my heart.
Thank you very much.
Also thank you for rev.. read more
A lot of teenagers sometimes face teenage pregnancy... this is a good poem
100/100
Keep writing, Mr. Zainul

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you Rhianne for exposing the cruel reality.
We have to find a way to save the girls from.. read more
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

That's right (:
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks a lot
You have a unique style of writing and poetry. Very well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the great compliments and wonderful review.
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very short tale that speak volume of reality of today. Yes, I've heard of stories like this, very frightening and sad at times..great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for taking time to tell how frightening the situation now.
What do you think about th.. read more
thats so sad!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the inspiring review.
Victoria Elizabeth

12 Years Ago

no promblem
Sad , many similar stories around the world . Technology both a blessing and a curse . Creating a self aware society and open nurturing environment for children might be an answer. Good write as usual.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Nicely said that technology both a blessing and a curse.Victims are all around the world.Yes, I agr.. read more

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Added on September 2, 2012
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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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