Goldfish

Goldfish can bring you happiness

Graceful goldfish swims

Like   elegant    butterfly

Beauty captures heart

Author's Note

Watch the video to enjoy the beauty of goldfish
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n42YzuSVvSs&feature=relmfu

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, the image is so very lovely! I think the butterfly is one of God's most beautiful creations, and the goldfish is always so very graceful as it moves in the waters...colors so vibrant, so attention getting - surely enough of the two to capture one's heart!
Thank you for sharing!!

[zainul]

Thanks for the very admiring review.
I am very impressed and inspired.

[Nautili]

This reminds me of the beautiful Koi in our pond, some of them have the most beautiful tails. Your poem will be remembered everytime I see them now!

[zainul]

Thank you,Nautily for your lovely review.
Koi is also very beautiful ornamental fish.
I adore your determination of remembering the poem.
I feel very honored.
Have a nice time.

[Marie]

An elegent swimming butterfly...how lovely.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for the lovely words of elegant review.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always you capture the moment with succinctness and judicious use of meaningful words. The anology of the butterfly is evokative when you imagine the fin and tail gracefully cutting through the water.

[Valentine]

Very nice..I love the freedom the gold fish shows while it sims around in the water..So many things do not have that freedom of movement..God blessd you..Katieh

[zainul]

Thank you,Katieh for your inspiring review and wonderful comments.
Yea,freedom is always beautiful.

[Stanley Wilson]

another great poem the imagery is vivid loved it

[zainul]

Adore your admiring review.
Glad that you liked it.

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Great job, Zainul.

[zainul]

You are appreciated for the great review,Cord.

[Jolie Blossom]

I love it :)

[zainul]

Your love is so crisp!
Thank you for the lovely review.

[Jolie Blossom]

:) There is something about haikus, and short poems such as this that just melt my heart. You should definitely write more!

[zainul]

It is quite heartening to learn this.
I feel supply comes from demand as economics suggests.

[Jolie Blossom]

:)

[zainul]

:)