Newest Friend

A Poem by zainul

Linking with lovely online geeks is a passion

I aspired to love an online girl,
Whose photo glittered like a pearl.
Her stunning name looked so unique,
I longed to link with the online geek.
I tried hard to add her as a friend,
She declined as knew the latest trend.
It broke my heart but still aspired
To win her friendship till very tired.
I took another way to look in the case,
I wrote a poem praising her lovely face.
This also did not work,my heart cried,
Lost most hope,my cup of love dried.
Felt very insulted and grew great anger,
I still thought of building a lover's sanger.
Lastly,I bought a bouquet and lovely antic,
I thought my dream would now smile and speak.
I sent these stuffs in festive wrapper.
It worked like magic and soon I got a letter.
She had added me as her newest friend,
I felt happy as the coaxing came to an end.

© 2012 zainul

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JourneyBlu

Nice job! Great flow and rhyme and I could really get the feeling of the piece. Just wanted to ask about the line "I sent these stuff in festive wrapper", I really like the line, but grammatically it should maybe be "this stuff" or "these things" or is it a nuance that I am just missing? Anyway, great write and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!