Manimal

Manimal is like vampires, wolves ,ghosts and aliens

Termite is cryptic in nature
Even a brave person fears this creature

Rat is also equally harmful
I bet they can never be cool

 They damage everything day and night
None can beat them in any fight

When they are attacked from one side
They turn around and take a hide

There are worse creature on the earth
Who have human face with dirty birth

They do more harm than savage animal
We may call them ugly manimal

You can see them here and there
To save your life take urgent care

Author's Note

You can see manimal everywhere

Reviews

[Marie]

Well, I have to disagree with this poem, because there was once a wonderful TV series called "Manimal.) It was about a man who could change into animals at any time one was needed. He used his power only for good. I think the series only lasted one season, probably because I was the only one watching it.

[zainul]

Thank you,Marie for your admiring review.
I searched and found the information of the TV series.
That series defined Manimal as a good power or character.
That is right of them in the context of that story.
I do not disagree or challenge them.
I have defined my manimal in my way.
You can see a man or woman is very good now,but he or she may commit great offense later.Just time and situation can make a person good or bad.
Hope you like my logic.

[Marie]

Your logic is flawless. My perception is flawed.

[zainul]

You inspire me like an angel.
Thank you so much.

[Eric Cox]

Describes the threat and I agree "ugliness" of manimal. A well penned write.

[zainul]

Thank you Eric for the admiring review.
I feel glad that you agree "ugliness" of manimal.
read moreThank you Eric for the admiring review.
I feel glad that you agree "ugliness" of manimal.
The threat of manimal often scares me.

[Stanley Wilson]

very cleverly written

[zainul]

Thanks for the inspiring review

[quinfinn]

all i can say is "rats!" yuck, pooh, ugh!!! clever poem though

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely review.
This is so enjoyable!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yes, they are cleverly shady creatures.... able to squeeze through the nooks and kranies of filth to survive they take no moral route.... A wonderful piece....

[zainul]

Thank you Priscilla for your explanatory and admiring review.
I feel very happy to read your wonderful observation.

[Priscilla Sayers]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[Phibby Venable]

this is a very unique write...and a very true one.
I enjoyed reading it a great deal.

[zainul]

Thanks for the very inspiring review.
Specially thank you for accepting it as a very true one.

[Rhianne Ney]

"Manimal" it's a great title I didn't know that this word even exist...
Good write...
I fear rats and I was too conscientious when I accidentally stepped on one...

[zainul]

Rhianne,thank you for the inspiring review.
Did you search the word in internet (google etc.)?
I also fear rats.They are dangerous animal.

[Rhianne Ney]

I didn't but the word's unique...

[zainul]

I googled and found its definition.
You can also search and see how unique is it.

[Rhianne Ney]

sure (:

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,Rhianne

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Antonio Valentino]

ahhhh those pesky little vermin..

still creatures of nature though yes..

ahh what can you do.. go get an extermiator anyway and some rat poison lol!!

great stuff here my friend... as always..

:)

[zainul]

Thank you,Antonio for the admiring review and amazing suggestions.
Yes,those pesky little vermin are really creatures of nature
But,killing them by exterminator or rat poison often turns fruitless manoeuvrings.They come again with greater power and potential.
However,I will think those options
seriously.
How do you want to manage Manimal ?

[Antonio Valentino]

im thinking maybe a necklace of garlic and maybe a laser gun as well... or, maybe just run for your life.... haha... :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

i liked this alot. great scheme and flow. nice job

[zainul]

You are so generous,Arbiter.
You are the first friend to greet the weird piece.
Thank you for the admiring review.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Harley (arbiter)]

your welcome friend.

[zainul]

Very nice of you, dear friend.