Tears

Written to express compassion to Sheila Kline at the loss of her son

Tears roll down my cheeks

As grieving hearts emit love

Adore benign souls

Reviews

[Alexandria Reece]

Your empathy expressed is contagious, you fit it all in so well. You've truly mastered this form friend. I am glad to see below that she herself enjoyed the piece, isn't that the greatest feeling? When the one who has inspired you takes note and turns out to appreciate it. Of course she would, you're a wonderful writer with a kind spirit.

[zainul]

Hi Alexandria,I can't express my gratefulness for your generosity.
I fully agree with you that when the one who has inspired me takes note and turns out to appreciate it is really the greatest feeling.
I adore you for the most admiring compliments and amazing review.

[Alexandria Reece]

I will always leave a good review for a job well-done and seeing that I have read no piece short of that produced by your hand it is safe to assume the compliments will keep flowing from me! Thank you for sharing this.

[Valentine]

A sweet and short one..but full of meaning..Valentine

[zainul]

Thanks for the amazing review.
This is a great inspiration for me.

[afra]

beautiful word ....touched my heart ....i love it ...well done ..i always love your work

[zainul]

Thank you,Afra for your warm compliments.
I feel very much honored and get inspiration from your generous words.
Thank you for the admiring review.

[zainul]

Beautiful heartfelt Senryu sir.
I guess, this speaks volume
Sheila must have felt
Your warm heart.

Oh now I read it below, well done
Poet

E.L.

[zainul]

Thank you for the very admiring review.
Yes,Sheila became very happy after reading this piece.
She expressed her feeling.
I am also very happy that you have appreciated the piece.
The poem is dedicated to all grieving hearts who lost their beloved ones.
I have enjoyed your lovely compliments.

It's truly heartfelt, and even if it's short, how a senryu is, it speaks volumes, and has a great value. Thank you for your kindred heart.

[zainul]

I live with your encouragement.
Thank you,Elisa Laura for always supporting me.

[tekphobik]

Very powerful three lines. You convey the concern without crossing into painful boundaries. Well done.

[zainul]

Thank you for your admiring review.
I feel very happy to meet you here.
I enjoy your spontaneous friendly gesture.
Thanks a lot for everything.

[That1Nerd23]

Short and simply, yet the point is powerful. Great job.

[zainul]

Thank you,Jessa, for the great review.
I am immensely inspired by your review.

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome.

[Sheila Kline]

I am indeed touched that my loss has inspired you to write such words! You are a Dear Heart with a kind soul!!

[zainul]

Thank you ,Sheila, for your wonderful comment and admiring review.
Yes,I agree that your loss inspired me to write this piece.
This is dedicated to all who lost their dear ones.
The original inspiration remains Sheila Kline,a very pleasant personality, who can smile despite severe pain in the heart.
I am grateful for your kind gesture.

[Aehr]

heart rending! I know how it is to loose someone...

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,Rhea.
Your review is very inspiring.

[Kenneth The Poet]

So true.

[zainul]

Thank you,Kennth.
Impressed by your amazing review.

[Tapsi]

short yet adequate. thoroughly moving.

[zainul]

Thank you,Tapsi for your admiring review.

[Tapsi]

the pleasure is all mine.

[zainul]

Thank you,talented one.