Tears

Written to express compassion to Sheila Kline at the loss of her son

Tears roll down my cheeks

As grieving hearts emit love

Adore benign souls

Reviews

[Alexandria Reece]

Your empathy expressed is contagious, you fit it all in so well. You've truly mastered this form friend. I am glad to see below that she herself enjoyed the piece, isn't that the greatest feeling? When the one who has inspired you takes note and turns out to appreciate it. Of course she would, you're a wonderful writer with a kind spirit.

[zainul]

Hi Alexandria,I can't express my gratefulness for your generosity.
I fully agree with you that when the one who has inspired me takes note and turns out to appreciate it is really the greatest feeling.
I adore you for the most admiring compliments and amazing review.

[Alexandria Reece]

I will always leave a good review for a job well-done and seeing that I have read no piece short of that produced by your hand it is safe to assume the compliments will keep flowing from me! Thank you for sharing this.

[ms. barrie]

it's amazing how with so few words you're able to convey such eloquent sadness with both the beauty of your words and how they speak volumes that all can relate to at one time or another. another wonderful write, zainul. thanks for sharing :)

[zainul]

Thank you for the thoughtful and admiring review.
I am very grateful to you for always supporting my efforts.

[ms. barrie]

You are verily welcome, zainul and i as well am always grateful for your reviews in supporting my writing efforts as well (sorry i know, not very original but i'm dealing with writer's block) lol (hugs)

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,lovely poetess.
After writing the amazing piece,'Owl' do you still have the writer's block?

[ms. barrie]

yes i am trying to venture into a genre that has eluded me since the dawn of me writing...intense love/erotica. the video/soundtrack on my profile as well as my current status, kind of gives you a hint and is also slowly (i'm always so slow) inspiring me. and you welcome, Dear Poet :)

[zainul]

That is quite heartening.
You have a nice heart.
You will win over all crises.

[ms. barrie]

aw as do you, zainul! well, i'm dancing as fast as i can, but then so are the rest of us :)

[zainul]

:)

[s y e]

Short, effective and great! Blew me away!

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the support to a mother.The poem came into being after reading a poem of Sheila Kline.You may find the poem at the following link:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wvhillbilly47/1015523/

[s y e]

Thank you for the link. I shall read and review the poem later on :-)

[Nevena]

I'm stounded that you can convey so much using so few words. Short and a sweet, a very good poem.

[zainul]

Thank you for the superb compliments and amazing review.
The poem came as an attempt to show compassion to my friend, Sheila Kline who lost her beloved son. Sheila Kline is a famous writer of this site.

[NaomiJim]

I don't know what else to tell you apart from that this is lovely. It's so short yet conveys a lot of feeling. Well done to you for being able to do that.

[zainul]

Thank you, dear friend for conveying your compliments so generously .
Your review is a world for me.I am very glad that you liked it.

[zainul]

I wanted to review your poem.
But,I could not get any.
Please post some of your work soon.

[redthai]

beautiful! love the simplicity and the power of the words used, to transmit the feelings here.

[zainul]

Thank you for the compliments and admiring review.

[quinfinn]

you are truly the haiku master, very deft indeed

[zainul]

Thank you for awarding me the great title.
Kindly pray for me so I can speak for everybody in haiku.
I am grateful for your inspiring review.

[quinfinn]

use what you know you do best is the best advice i ever got in college for creative writing, you seem to have learned this

[zainul]

I feel very blessed by your precious lesson which you got in college for creative writing.
Thank you again.

[Rhianne Ney]

Is this a haiku? if it was I don't want to ask you to add details... (;
Just wondering...
but it was short and meaningful anyway
good good write
I hope I can cry as normally as anyone

[zainul]

Thanks for your wonderful review.
Please cry if you have some scope.
Crying releases agony,pain and frustration.

[Rhianne Ney]

yeah.. but my tears wont flow its stucked

[zainul]

How can you say so?

[Rhianne Ney]

I don't know, I rarely cry... and sometimes I force it... I can only shed tears when it's serious it's confusing

[zainul]

Did you consult an eye specialist?
If the problem is not a physiological one it might be for some psychological cause.
Please tell your problem in some details.
You may have some solutions from this site because there are many experts here.
They are following our conversation in the live feed.

[Rhianne Ney]

oh... thank you... I can only cry when it's heavy and can only cry for movies... and I really force some tears... maybe the effect of holding back my feelings...

[zainul]

I understand your point.
I am really sorry to learn this abnormal phenomenon.
Hope you will find an effective solution soon .

[Rhianne Ney]

I hope so, thank you for your comment... (: and for worrying... I felt at ease...

[zainul]

I feel a little relaxed at your apparent easiness.
I request you to kindly see an ophthalmologist and a psychologist asap.
Wish you best luck,my friend.

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you... i'll try, can I do it even though I'm just 14?

[zainul]

Yea,you can.
It would be nice if you share your problem with your parents.

[Rhianne Ney]

I wish I could I was quite away from them... I mean we're not so close.. and I can't talk to them straightforwardly

[zainul]

Please make it clear if you have no obligation or restriction.

[Rhianne Ney]

um.. I can't open up to them... not much

[Personne]

This is the best haiku I have ever read in my entire life. No joke. It makes me heart feel compassion too! It just makes me feel like I could understand a person's grief just by reading this poem. I love it.

[Alicia Beavis]

Short but powerful. Just how I like my poetry!

[zainul]

Hi Alicia,
Thanks for the inspiring review and great compliments.
Best regards,
Zainul

[zainul]

Dear Courday,
Your admiring review and inspiring compliments are treasure of my life. The poem came into being after reading a poem of Sheila Kline.You may find the poem at the following link:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wvhillbilly47/1015523/
Thanks for the nice words.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Eloha]

Zainul my good man, this speaks to me of compassion. Are you a Buddist?

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review.
I am happy to learn that this speaks to you of compassion.read moreThanks for the admiring review.
I am happy to learn that this speaks to you of compassion.
Have a nice time with your faith and family.