Monsoon Morning

Monsoon Morning

A Poem by zainul
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A monsoon morning impressed me by its elegant beauty created by moving patches of clouds.

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Cool monsoon morning

Breaks silence with songs of birds

Greets the world with clouds

© 2012 zainul


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Haiku happens to be one of my favorite mediums to write in, and this is an exceptional piece! I can hear the bird song reading this! Thank you for the great write!

Krystina

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

That would be great favor to me.
Thank you in advance.
Ebb and Flow

12 Years Ago

I have sent you some read requests of only a few, as I have over 60 haiku.
zainul

12 Years Ago

OK
I will check them asap.
Quite lovely. Someone requested that I write a haiku about a monsoon, but I got all my information from the Internet. You have actually seen one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you,Marie for your lovely compliments and inspiring review.
This caught my eye because of the title, and I have to admit, I really like it. Simple, but very pongient and to the point. So few words used, yet so few needed. Gorgeous.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you,Vittoria for your admiring review.
Your lovely compliments and review are world to m.. read more
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Pax
lovely and beautiful as always.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your admiring review.
Lovely thought & well done Haiku....
I love our desert monsoons..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the admiring review and compliments.
I love to learn more about your desert experie.. read more
Renée

12 Years Ago

when I visit the desert in the summer we have monsoons..the air cools but is still warm..and rain co.. read more
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the great information.
Please share more pertinent information if you have time.read more
Nice homage to such wonderful aspect of nature. Beautifully crafted and thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks again for the very inspiring review and lovely compliments.
Simply amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the admiring review.
I love the simplicity of this piece as it paints the beauty of the new morning...
beautiful my friend!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Hi Priscilla,
Thanks for the fabulous review.I feel very very impressed.
Thanks for ever.. read more
Brilliant write! =) Very imaginative!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Your review is very admiring.
Thanks for the great review.
Sleeping Maiden

12 Years Ago

No problem! =)
zainul

12 Years Ago

Thanks for your nice gesture =)
Elegant write must be beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Moon.
Your lovely review inspires me.

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Added on August 17, 2012
Last Updated on August 17, 2012
Tags: monsoon, morning, elegant, beauty, moving, patches, clouds, silence, songs, birds, greets, world

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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