Lovely senryu! It irks me when people call pieces such as these a haiku. Haikus relate strictly to nature; a senryu, human nature and events. This is a great SENRYU. Anyway, it seems pieces about current events are few and far inbetween. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Hi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senr.. read moreHi Savannah,
Thanks for your lovely review.
I appreciate your vital point regarding senryu.
I have to learn more.
I need your support.
Happy Olympics!!!
12 Years Ago
Haikus do not relate strictly to nature. And human nature is still nature.
12 Years Ago
Thanks for the lovely review.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
12 Years Ago
I took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly rel.. read moreI took a very extensive study on haiku/senryu/5-7-5. A haiku, traditionally anyways, is strictly related to nature. Senryu is human natures and events. 5-7-5 is everything in between.
Yes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it.. read moreYes, you could be right. I did a haiku using an abstract concept once, but I don't remember where it is.
I was not here yet when this was written. So, I am seeing it for the first time now.
-grin-
I am a summer Olympics junkie. I love the games! I watch them all. Except maybe badminton. Really, badminton? -shakes head- are we sure that's a sport?
Perfect three lines as you do, Sir. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Thank you Rogue for the amazing words and awesome grin.
It is an open book.
Heartiest we.. read moreThank you Rogue for the amazing words and awesome grin.
It is an open book.
Heartiest welcome you to the open book of London Olympics which is the bridge
between all past and future Olympics.
I will enjoy debate on badminton.I am sure some one is around to join the discussion.
Very short and lovely piece.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your admiring review.
This has inspired me immensely.
I am trying to share the truth.
I need to do more.
Seek your support and blessing. .. read moreI am trying to share the truth.
I need to do more.
Seek your support and blessing.
Thanks for your admiring review.
The pleasure of the Olympics never ends.
So,I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
Thank you Personne for the wonderful review .
Your amazing words rejuvenated the memories of t.. read moreThank you Personne for the wonderful review .
Your amazing words rejuvenated the memories of the Olympics which brought together the whole world around London just recently.
I am glad to learn that you enjoyed it.
The pleasure of the Olympics never ends.
So,I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
Ahhhh love this!! The Olympics make me smile that the world can come together and for a short amount of time it's like world peace. Great write my friend!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Jolie for your awesome review.
We can call The Olympics as the harbinger of world pe.. read moreThank you Jolie for your awesome review.
We can call The Olympics as the harbinger of world peace.
Since the spirit of The Olympics continues, I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
lol, you sound like me Savannah! yes it is , a wonderful senryu!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks for the inspiring review.
Since the spirit of Olympics continues, I Wish you Happy Olym.. read moreThanks for the inspiring review.
Since the spirit of Olympics continues, I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!
Really,it was great.
Let's advance its spirit and inspire all.
I Wish you Happy Olympics.. read moreReally,it was great.
Let's advance its spirit and inspire all.
I Wish you Happy Olympics!!!